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for A Delicate Obsession

by Avrild

person otherside
schedule July 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love the darkness the story has slipped into. way to keep us reading, and putting off the \"final confrontation\"- and i don\'t mean against voldie! It was quite a shocker to go from snapes lemon fresh memories of laura right into his humiliation and unexpected death, a wonderful twist and now we get to see where all those letters to his mum were leading us. Keep the wonderful updates coming!!
person Lady Aidil
schedule July 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
April!You are incredible!Snape is getting beeing crazy and obsessed with the weird idea of seeking Laura and denying the simply truth that Hermiona is the love of his life-because there was she-her thoughts,feelings,brilliant mind that he`d been dealing with,despite her charmed appearance-if he loved her-he loves her character as well as the body or maybe more.
Your fic is driving me crazy as much as the recent events him-could you imagine that I`ve checked this site many times today looking for your update.My impatience and curiosity have increased from chapter to chapter-I admire your imagination,there are not simple cliches from another fics,however it`s difficult to avoid them.
Regards.L.A.
person Katharina
schedule July 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Another angsty chapter! *Rubs hands deliciously* Oooo, keep it up. :o)
person Ezmerelda
schedule July 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I haven\'t abandoned you! I was out of town in slow-as-molasses-in-December Internet land and couldn\'t get on to read your updates.

Now that I\'m back home to my loverly DSL connectionreadread them all, from The Little Library to In for a Knut, In for a Galleon.

I love it! I\'m so sad for Snape and Hermione, how will they ever work their way through this?

The visit to his mother was unexpected, somewhere along the way I gathered she was deceeased. Obviously, I read the clues wrong!

Thanks for writing! Please keep me on you update list, I don\'t intend on going out of town again for a while!

Ez
person Halo
schedule July 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I\'m getting so anxious to read the end! You\'ve done a wonderful job so far, keep it up!
person TeaRoses
schedule July 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
\"Good Morning, Starshine\"? He really is in hell. (Sorry, couldn\'t resist... actually I like Hotel California) Anyway, this just gets better and better. I feel so much compassion for Snape right now. I can\'t wait to read the rest.
person Amanda
schedule July 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow. What can I say this chapter was great. Please keep up the good work. I can\'t wait to find out what is going to happen next.
person Andrian
schedule July 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh wonderful as usual. I am glad someone finally found Hemione out. How indeed is she to handle this...Snape nightmare was a bit shivery but effective..

Hugs
Andrian
person Mary Kay Melton
schedule July 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM

April

Your time line is fine \"Hotel California\" was the theme of my junior prom in 1977. Good story, I have enjoyed reading it. I appreciate the way you have been updating the story. I look forward to a new chapter each day.

Mary Kay
person Gethsemane
schedule July 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I bee been following this story for a while and love it dearly. The last chapter was really good. Percy
as a spy was a brilliant bit. I\'d never considered it before. Good job.