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awww the end... yes, i\'m up for an epilouge!!! a very sweet ending to your story, a very accepting severus... i liked him randomly hexing the man that helped him, good to know he hasn\'t gone all soft. And good for Hermione to tell HIM off instead ;)

I may not have been reviewing (shame on me!) but I have followed your fic all the way through. I wondered how you were going to deal with the final chapter and was impressed with what you came up with. As a HG/SS shipper, I was of course delighted to see the pair back together, but Hermione\'s injuries ensured the fic ended withoutoveroverly perfect happily ever afte und understand that it\'s perhaps time for you to move onto another story, but I would be thrilled to discover an epilogue added to this one some day. You left a few threads dangling such as Hermione\'s reaction to Severus\' relationship with Tara, and it would be nice to see some of them tied up. By the way, I loved your interpretation of Severus, especially when he began to suspect the truth about Laura. I\'m looking forward to reading some more of your work in the future.

Well that was a sweet ending. But you did mention an epiloge

What can I say? You are wonderous. An Epilogue would be nice. I like to keep things tidy. ;o)
As a total summary of \"A Delicate Obsession\", I have to say that it was damn good. Well written, and well thought out. Sometimes I was a bit confused, but it was always explained (or I reread it to make sure I hadn\'t misunderstood), so I came out of it well. You\'re a good author, and I know you try awfully hard. The effort paid off, and this wound being very, very good. I appreciate the fact that you listened and actually took tips or ideas from your reviewers. That\'s part of why we\'re here and there are too many authors that take us for granted, or whine about reviews for shoddy work in their writing. You never disappointed. So thank you, AprilGrey. You made this story definitely worth continuing and rereading. I\'m absolutely going to read \"The Hunt for Hermione.\" :o)
Much love and best wishes,
~Kate~

Ooh, neat chapter... we\'re finally getting down and dirty (^_^). I love the description of Bechard and what he did to Melanie.

Karen

Hullo! I\'ve actually been following your story since its inception, and just been too lazy to review. In my own pitiful defense, I\'d just like to say that you didn\'t seem to need my help and support or any correction in grammar, spelling, or canon-correctness. But when I found myself checking twice in one day to see if you\'d updated yet, I knew I had to break my silence and leave a review. *Blushes* Yes, I checked twice today, and that was *ahem* after I\'d already read your update. I think I might need help....maybe in the form of the next chapter? Please? I\'ll give you a cookie!!!! *Frantically waves a bag of Keebler\'s uber-fudgey cookies*
-jo

10 minutes later.....

WHAT DO YOU MEAN YOU HAVEN\'T UPDATED YET!!!!!!!!! *Takes deeeeeeeeep breaths, trying to control herself....then gives up and begins ranting at the computer and the author fatefate in general until a bunch of men in white coats show up and put her in restraints*

Dude in White Coat: Ok jo, we told not not to read anymore fanfiction during your computer time, you know that it just sets your therapy back.

jo: *screaming* UPDATE DAMMIT, DON\'T LET THEM DO THIS TO ME!!! HELP ME SNAPE!!!! LAURA NEEDS YOU!!!!!!

Dude in White Coat: *sigh* There\'s no help for her when she\'s like this. Sedate her and put her in restraints. I don\'t want her hyperventilating on my watch.

jo: *still screaming* CAN\'T YOU SEE WHAT YOU\'VE REDUCED ME TO??!!! I NEED SUSTENANCE!!!! I NEED SMUT!!! I NEED ANGST!!!! I NEED ANOTHER - *stops screaming and looks at the IV in bewilderment* oh, that feels tingly, what\'d y\'all use this.....*passes out*


Can she be saved by the immediate production and posting of another chapter? Only time will tell.........TBC!

Schniff. Normally, I don\'t particularly like happy endings, but since the hour is late (03.11) I\'m getting all mushy and sad.
Yea Gods Percy\'s being quite \'cool\'.
Boo Gods Sirius is such a bad-ass. Heh heh.
Yea Gods Snape & Hermione end up together.
Boo Gods Snape is fictional and I won\'t be able to add him to my *ahem* \'private collection\'.

Lovely. Really enjoyed this fic and will go to ff.net to read \'The Hunt\'. Happy writing and readings to you for future\'s sake. :)

that was too swee lov loved it. an epilogue would be icing on a very good cake. i\'m thinking chocolate fudge icing on a three layer chocolate fudge pudding cake. yummm!

Wow, Very dark. Can\'t wait for more. This Chapter I greedly gobbled up so make the next one loooonnnngggeerrrr.(smiles)

You still surprise me with new ideas and very exciting plots-this story of Severus` family is quite original,I suppose,have never met the similar one and appreciate it as well as the main plot with Hermiona`s second identity yet I can`t stand waiting for the moment when Snape will fully realize what role Hermiona has played in his life.
I`mostmost dying of curiosity!You are GREAT!Asking for more-regards L.A.