schedule
July 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
An epilogue would be wonderful. Maybe a few years down the road when she has finished her apprenticeship, maybe going through the next couple years with Sev making a potion to help restore her nerve endings, and helping her with her NEWTs. It has been a great story. You are a terrific writer, your dialogue is believable and flows well, the story is well thought out, and the idea was very original I thought.
Jen :)
Jen :)
schedule
July 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Please make an epiloge. this story is great and deserves it.
schedule
July 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was so moving... Actually I am up for an Epilogue, but that\'s your decision. That was an incredibly moving scene the way they made love and he accepted her as she was, not only that she wasn\'t Laura but that she is now disabled. (I mean, hopefully she can recover but so many people are afraid to associate the disabled and sex, so I thought that was an excellent scene). Hope I didn\'t say anything weird there... loved this so much.
schedule
July 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great! The last chapter was great :). I especially liked Snape\'s most charming/scariest smile yet. Had a good laugh over that. :)
schedule
July 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Lo end ending April, and I would love to see an epilogue. Can\'t have you wasting your time cleaning when you can be amusing me with incredible stories, now can we? ;) Snape\'s stepmother was wonderfully characterised in so few words.
schedule
July 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You are writing Hunt HermHermione?! I love that story! I\'ve really got to start paying attention to author\'s names, it\'s getting embarrassing.
I love the way this ended, I liked having him find out on his own rather than her telling him, it gave him time to accept it and move on. Kudos to you for such a gripping story! Now I\'ve got to run over to FFN to see if you\'ve updated Hunt since the last time I read it...
Thanks for writing,
Ez
I love the way this ended, I liked having him find out on his own rather than her telling him, it gave him time to accept it and move on. Kudos to you for such a gripping story! Now I\'ve got to run over to FFN to see if you\'ve updated Hunt since the last time I read it...
Thanks for writing,
Ez
schedule
July 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
The last chapter is gorgoeus,as well as the all story-I became your devoted reader and now feel the kind of pain that this fic is over-it appears the sort of addiction to your work,all the most you were an incredibly fast writer so the pleasure of rea was wasn`t spoiled by the annoyance of long waiting-I`ll miss you as a writer and hope heartfully you`ll write the new fic as both amazing and ingenious as this one.*sighs*Thank you for your splendid work! I`m going to read all fics you`ve ever written and will write.With love.L.A.
schedule
July 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This has been a wonderful story! Thank you so much and thanks for your frequent and consistent updates!
schedule
July 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the reasons that Snape is by far my favorite character, canon and fanon. He\'s a snarky bastard and then he\'s a tender lover. This would explain my obsession with moody men. (lol) I have really enjoyed this story. Don\'t let it be your last. (And I could do with an epilogue, if you don\'t mind.)
schedule
July 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Epilogue? How about a sequel!!!