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for A Delicate Obsession

by Avrild

person feline942
schedule February 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice story, it sounds familiar, maybe I started reading it a long time ago and forgot about reading updates. Anyways I like your severus, there was lots of great charater development, good job! You\'re definitely a new favorite!
schedule December 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely LOVED this story! It was very creative using the \"Laura Glamour Charm\" and the inserts with the demon and Snape\'s dead \"mother\" added a distinct kind of dynamic element to the story in the last few chapters. I hope that you continue writing and I will be back to look at some of your other stories.


Ciao ^_^
person MaddyRiddle
schedule November 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I like it a lot.
person Lacy
schedule September 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
BWAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Romantic, HOT, fairly IC and funny asL. TL. That demon was a bit scary.. *shudders* ick..ryinrying to still clear the image of a demon scratching its balls* I feel .... unclean...

Anyway especialy love the epalog. *giggles* the kids are.. DARLING! BWHAHAHAH! I can justtureture a funny story involving the Snapes, and the Weasleys... several dark haired children all mixed in with the red heads... WHOOHOO lol talk about raising hell! *dies laughing*

Tempting it is to write something like that, miixing in likely the young weasley kids from another story, love those kids. *still more fits of giggles* Do love how hermione took care of the problem with dobby.. Poor dobby. *more giggles*

Well loved the story thought to let you know. Ever thought of a sequal? Got those few years there and certainly an interesting bi line of possibilities with that other orderhilehile Snape\'s mom (If you call that thing that) out of the picture still got that demon, who seems unusualy interested in Snape.. *shudders* eeeeeew!
person Lacy
schedule September 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Just found this story, I love the cinderella-esk story. As well as the beauty and the beast. Two of my favorites. (Tam Lyn *grins*) I\'ve collected fairy tales all over the world and its wonderful when someone admits to using the old stories for a new one. Currently got a couple stories of my own completely based off various fairy tales.

Anyway got to chap nine and I figured I\'ll make a comment just so I can get my breath back. Dear me, Dobby with a crush..

Is anyone going to notice his latest addition to his wardrobe?

*wanders off to laugh her head off*
person Crystal
schedule September 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
What a great story! I\'ve been waiting to read this story til it was finished, so was thrilled to finally be able to (Too many WIPs at once drive me batty). I think you kept a nice balance of vulnerable Snape without turning him into a big mushball. I\'ve heard good things about your answer to the WIKTT Regency challenge, so I\'ll be heading over that way soon. I know it\'s still WIP, but I\'ll take a chance. :) Thanks!
person otherside
schedule August 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
yay. thanu, tu, that was a perfect \"happy ending\". btw i LOVE the orange pony and the little fellow with bunny ears. why couldn\'t i have grown up a wizard ? *sigh*. I hope you find more inspiration in OOTP ;)
person Ezmerelda
schedule August 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love the scene where Albus re-thinks his acceptance of Yasmina\'s invitation. How proud Hermione must be tve cve children that frighten even the great wizard Dumbledore!

THanks for writing!
person luna
schedule July 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this story. keep up the good work,

lw
person Lady Aidil
schedule July 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Thank you once more-for an equisite work of writing and this sweet epilogue.I could read your fics endlessly,recently I`ve done it on FFNet and assure you-\"A Delicate Obsession\" isn`t only one such a lovely story at all.Many hugs,with hope you will create new fic as soon as you`d be able to! Regards L.A.