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for A Delicate Obsession

by Avrild

person Ezmerelda
schedule July 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WOW! His thought, \"she\'s nothing like Tara, Tara was a firebrand and bossy...\" made me shake my head. He just described Hermione! Once she begins to feel comfortable around him, I\'m sure he\'ll see that side of her.

The glimpse you gave of Tara was interesting, so, she was his...what? Co-worker, apprentice...? ::Shrugs:: that\'s not really a question, because I *know* you\'ll give us more information later, right?

Thanks for writing, I really enjoyed the euphoria Hermione was experiencing after her hours long talk with Severus, and I can\'t wait to see them get to know each other better. I imagine there\'ll be hell to pay when he discovers who she really is, but that\'s all part of the charm of this story.

Thanks again!
person Andrian
schedule July 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I am enthralled with the story. The background with Tara is tantalizing and so sad. Our poor Sev and his prejudices and problems...sigh...

Cant wait for the next chapter

Good JOB!

Andrian
person Kronae
schedule July 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I especially love the latest chapter
As soon as I hit the \"I\'m your mudblood slut\" line I nearly rolled on the floor laughing!
Looking forward to the next installment.
~Kronae
person Halo
schedule July 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oooooo... Hermione is so BAD!!! I *LOVE* it! Must write more! MORE!!!
person Karena Elizabeth
schedule July 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*panting heavily! MORE! Please? I\'m begging here, and I don\'t like to beg!

I\'ll give you a cookie if you can update quickly!
Karena Elizabeth
person giovanna
schedule July 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! Quite a memory, that. This is quite interesting, you\'ve got me hooked. I can\'t wait for more!
person Laerai
schedule July 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love the tensions and the intrigue so far. I\'m anxiously awaiting the next installment! ^_^
person Yuri
schedule July 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh thanks so much for continuing...and Im so glad your incoporated the new book into it (was that on purpose?) Well keep on writing
person giovanna
schedule July 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting, I\'m quite curious who this Tara is, and even more curious how he will react when he finds out who his mystery girl really is. Looking forward to more! And, btw, the move went as well as expected- half my stuff is still in boxes in the basement and will probably stay there awhile as I like having the e roo room! Later, G.
person Karena Elizabeth
schedule July 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ya\' know... I often have people tell me cliffhangers are evil. I don\'t personally believe it, but I just thought I\'d pass that along ;) This is moving along quiet nicely! Thank you for the fast update and I hope we can see another chapter soon!

Thanks
Karena Elizabeth