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for A Delicate Obsession

by Avrild

person jenbachand
schedule July 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. It\'s going good. I\'m awaiting another wonderful chapter soon. I want to hear Hermione being described to Hermione.

Jen :)
person MarySue
schedule July 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is very nice! i like the way Snape compares the two; and I\'m looking forward to the moment when he realizes who she is. Ouch! That\'s gotta hurt! ;) -Red
person BakaChan
schedule July 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*GROANS* cliffhangers are oh so evil! more soon please...... pretty please!
person Ezmerelda
schedule July 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Uh oh, Hermione\'s about to get an earful. She\'ll blow her cover too, if she tries to defend herself.

I can\'t wait to see what Dumbledore comes up with when he starts following (or has someone else follow) Severus. Will Dumbledore see through the glamour? (most likely) Will he have a private chat with Hermione? (again, possible) Will he say anything to Severus? (knowing his penchant for tormenting his potions master, I think not, at least, not right away.)

I am thoroughly enjoying this fic, it reminds me (just a tad) of a story called Dreaming\'s Not a Crime, where Hermione takes a potion to age herself (slightly), runs into Severus and...let\'s just say it gets rather steamy. Updates are slow on that one, so I\'m glad to have yours to read. Don\'t worry, yours is not a mirror image in any way to the other, they\'re just similar enough to bring it to mind.

Thanks for writing!
person Karena Elizabeth
schedule July 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yes... well... *ponders the situation* One would think you referring to something other than your oliffliff hangers. But of course, youo wouldn\'t be doing that would you? ;)

Excellent plot, and HELL YES GIRL POWER! ;)

Please please please update soon? cookies and such await quick updaters in the pormised land ;)
Karena ELizabeth
person Red Writing Hood
schedule July 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ah...I am truely enjoying this tale. I wonder what will/is going to happen when Severus discovers the truth about his Laura. Im looking forward to the next part.

RWH
person -E-
schedule July 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh, AprilGrey, You are really on the move with this one. The adventure of impending death for SS at Voldemort\'s bidding, the possible (or inevitable) exposure of HG as \'Laura\' after she realizes she\'s in love with SS.... Can\'t wait.... it\'s sooo good!
person jenbachand
schedule July 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great update. This should be very interesting.

Jen :)
person Ezmerelda
schedule July 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OK, so now you need to explain the Laura enchantment a little further. Can Hermione put it on and take it off at will now? Is it limited as to the number of times she can use it? Was Tara wearing the Laura enchantment, or is it just a coincidence?

Enjoying the story immensely, thanks for writing!
person Tegan
schedule July 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was intense. I really liked the idea that Snape hides his painful memories in a pensieve.

--Tegan