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July 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hmm... I\'m waiting for the day Hermione really blows it (pardon the pun). Tension is good. Very very good. You\'re doing a wonderful job, really! I just kinda wish the chap wer were longer.
~Kate~
~Kate~
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July 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I\'m enjoying your story. Well done.
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July 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
(And no, I\'m not for sale either! I have 4 cats and it seemed like a funny joke at the time . . .;)*
I\'m *so* enjoying this story! It\'s especially nice that you are doing such frequent updates, as there\'s little that\'s more frustrating than finding a really good WIP fic and waiting for the next update (are you listening, JKR????)
Re Chapter 6: It\'s interesting to wonder what Snape could have done in OotP *if* he had learned about Harry, et al, storming the Ministry. After all, any intervention on his part could have resulted in his being exposed (hee hee) as the double agent he is. Certainly, he couldn\'t have gone in person to the Ministry--can you imagine if he\'d been there when Voldemort showed up?? We don\'t see/hear much about Snape\'s reactions to that whole incident, the death of Sirius, etc., and I\'m dying to know--of course, the usual facade is up, at least from Harry\'s POV, but I wonder . . . Maybe in the next book we\'ll get to see more of what Snape is up to for the Order--and I\'d love to see *him* in battle!
*A footnote in case you didn\'t get the joke--\"cathouse\" is a synonym for \"whorehouse\". I found this out when I was around 12 and had gotten my first cat. My parents insisted he live outside, so I asked my mom if we could get him a cathouse for shelter in bad weather. After she recovered from the heart attack, she told me what a cathouse really was. Oops! My bad!
Damiana
I\'m *so* enjoying this story! It\'s especially nice that you are doing such frequent updates, as there\'s little that\'s more frustrating than finding a really good WIP fic and waiting for the next update (are you listening, JKR????)
Re Chapter 6: It\'s interesting to wonder what Snape could have done in OotP *if* he had learned about Harry, et al, storming the Ministry. After all, any intervention on his part could have resulted in his being exposed (hee hee) as the double agent he is. Certainly, he couldn\'t have gone in person to the Ministry--can you imagine if he\'d been there when Voldemort showed up?? We don\'t see/hear much about Snape\'s reactions to that whole incident, the death of Sirius, etc., and I\'m dying to know--of course, the usual facade is up, at least from Harry\'s POV, but I wonder . . . Maybe in the next book we\'ll get to see more of what Snape is up to for the Order--and I\'d love to see *him* in battle!
*A footnote in case you didn\'t get the joke--\"cathouse\" is a synonym for \"whorehouse\". I found this out when I was around 12 and had gotten my first cat. My parents insisted he live outside, so I asked my mom if we could get him a cathouse for shelter in bad weather. After she recovered from the heart attack, she told me what a cathouse really was. Oops! My bad!
Damiana
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July 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Those were some great chapters! I have to chime in with the other reviewers and say that part about Dobby is just hilarious! And it\'s nice how they\'re getting so close, and sex on the beach too! I felt so sorry for Snape when they were all laughing at him, that was so touching.
I hate to ask this in a review, but is there any way I can join WIKTT? I have a couple of ideas for fics of my own... I\'ve only written anime fanfics so far but I\'d really like to try an SS/HG story.
I hate to ask this in a review, but is there any way I can join WIKTT? I have a couple of ideas for fics of my own... I\'ve only written anime fanfics so far but I\'d really like to try an SS/HG story.
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July 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It looks like you got some sun yourself...
I laughed out loud at that! The clues are right there in front of him, I wonder how long it will take until they click!
I was rather disappointed that you didn\'t include Hermione\'s (inevitable) discussion with Dobby, I was looking forward to some more laughs!
Thanks writwriting, can\'t wait for more!
OH, shameless plug here: I finally screwed up the courage to answer a WIKTT Challenge! I wrote a little piece called, Even Professionals Make Mistakes (ok, so I stink at titles). It\'s an answer to the 2 to 6 challenge, it\'s actually posted at fanfiction.net, the link is in a file in the challenge folder. Plereadread it and tell me what you think. Thanks!
I laughed out loud at that! The clues are right there in front of him, I wonder how long it will take until they click!
I was rather disappointed that you didn\'t include Hermione\'s (inevitable) discussion with Dobby, I was looking forward to some more laughs!
Thanks writwriting, can\'t wait for more!
OH, shameless plug here: I finally screwed up the courage to answer a WIKTT Challenge! I wrote a little piece called, Even Professionals Make Mistakes (ok, so I stink at titles). It\'s an answer to the 2 to 6 challenge, it\'s actually posted at fanfiction.net, the link is in a file in the challenge folder. Plereadread it and tell me what you think. Thanks!
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July 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Is it weird that I find this strangely funny? Ah well, thanks!
~Kate~
~Kate~
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July 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I\'m really enjoying this story. I can\'t wait to see how poor Snape reacts when he finds out its Hermione! Looking forward to the next chapters! Aejay
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July 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
on Ch.11
Oh, his sunburned nose is too sweet! And I thought you caught exactly the right emotions when they laughed at him at the high table. I really am looking forward to the \"reveal\" on this story.
Oh yes, and Dobby\'s a hoot! What a perverted little elf and yet sooo believable. The knickers situation COULD have been canon if JKR had thought of it
Oh, his sunburned nose is too sweet! And I thought you caught exactly the right emotions when they laughed at him at the high table. I really am looking forward to the \"reveal\" on this story.
Oh yes, and Dobby\'s a hoot! What a perverted little elf and yet sooo believable. The knickers situation COULD have been canon if JKR had thought of it
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July 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It`s great fic,with plot which is getting more and more interesting so I`m very happy that you have updated so quickly-please-do it as soon as possible`cause I`m dying of curiosity what their relationship will develop,besides I always like idea of personality`s \"switch\"-that is a pleasurable thing,especially in wizards` world-all these charms and Polyjuice Potion-very wide opportunities of usage in love affairs-I enjoy all fics including such hints.It`s interesting when Snape will suspect that Laura is similar to this hated Know-it-all and what will happen with his love if he recognized Hermiona in his lover.Are you giong to write more about former Snape`s lover-Tara?I`m waiting inpatiently for next chapter of this gorgeous fic!
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July 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. Sorry, I don\'t have much to say.. but it\'s really good! Keep going. :)