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for A Delicate Obsession

by Avrild

person Karen
schedule July 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was neat. They\'re finally being told in no uncertain terms that things are going to get a lot darker - no doubt about it. I liked the conversation between Hermione and Harry/Ron/Ginny and I really liked the memory that Snape threaded back into his head.

person jenbachand
schedule July 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. I\'m guessing at the ball is when all will be revealed. I see angst and fluff ahead, and I hope more wonderful smut. It\'s great.

Jen :)
person Taya
schedule July 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very, very good so far...I like the idea, it\'s very original. Wonder what Snape\'ll do when he figures out it\'s been Hermione the whole time??
person otherside
schedule July 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I simply love your story!!! sorry you won\'t get a in depth review from me, no english major here :) . but i can\'t wait for your next update, andove ove your snape, and the whole dobby thing.... lol. knew there was something wrong with that house elf.
person Ezmerelda
schedule July 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Aw, you did it to me again! Twice! I hope the ending of this chapter indicates that the VERY NEXT CHAPTER will hold the much-looked-forward-to DISCUSSION with DOBBY. I\'m snickering as I write this, I don\'t know why, but I expect this discussion to be VERY entertaining! Not that Severus/Tara, Severus/Laura isn\'t, it\'s just a different kind of entertaining.

Thanks for writing!
person giova
schedule July 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
The last few chapters have been really good! Sorry about my dwindling reviews, I\'m terribly busy right now! But,m stm still reading when I can, so please update soon.
person Halo
schedule July 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Damn, Hermione, how did you get yourself into this mess? Great chapter! I\'d be having a nervous breakdown right now if I were her. :)
person ~Eureka~
schedule July 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I have to say- I think this is the best Snape/Hermione fic I\'ve EVER read. Really!
person Kitty D
schedule July 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
And again, bloody bryliant! (Sorry about any spell mistakes, but I\'m portuguese...)

Keep updating, cause I love this story. It remindes me a lot of \" Dreaming is not a crime.\", a story that I loved, but dont know what happend to it...
Well, keep those chapters coming, that I\'ll keep revewing!

person Karena Elizabeth
schedule July 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
When is he gunna find out!?!?! Must - know!

Great CHapter!
Karena ELizabeth