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Call me perverse, but I loved this story. Evil, absolutely evil. And so much like Lucius. *lol* You have such a fascinating way of using the perfect words even in an ugly, shocking matter like this. I

Gods, I could almost HEAR the NIN song...very appropriate title for such a piece. Lucius the Depraved versus Harry the Innocent - and there\'s nothing Harry can do about it! Very nicely done, as are al you your stories. More people should read them! Grr!

- \'Da Kitten

Luscious! Everything I love here - chanslash, Lucius & that serpent cane... delectable! I hope to see more of this sort of thing from you... yes, I admit it, I\'m a pervert & proud of it!

Love & Serpents\' Kisses,
Anath.

I like this... It inspires me to write my own Luciusry Sry Slash fic... if only I didn\'t have a million other unfinished fics...

~vashsunglasses

My, Lucius is an evil, evil man. I liked the detail of him not touching Harry with bare skin. His pureblood thinking even continues through a rape. Poor little Harry, huh?

Absolutely brilliant! You have written Lucius so well, just spot on evil! I love the way he refuses to touch Harry but still does everything to the poor little boy he wants to. I have many favorite characters and Lucius is one of them. Too bad there aren

Read this on Lumox and Nox yesterday and adored it ... after a bit of reflection, however, I have a couple of minor quibbles. First of all, I see you\'ve borrowed your visual characterization of Lucius from the film, and we already know from the trailer that Lucius does in fact touch Harry. Second, we also know that by age 14 Harry was able to resist Imperius, so I would have expected him to resist a bit more.

In any event, neither of these really matter. Your characterization of Lucius is spot-on, and the creepy remove he feels from Harry (and from any repugnance towards his own actions) is beautifully emblematized in his use of the cane and his refusal to touch him. Frankly, this works a lot better for me than the scene in the film in which Lucius touches Harry\'s scar: why would he want to dirty his lovely Pureblood hands? And while I wouve lve liked to have seen Harry a bit stronger and more resistant, this is primarily Lucius\'s story, and so the way \"he\" chooses to narrate the action works in this context.

As someone who\'s is still trying, I know how difficult it is to find a way to write Harry/Lucius plausibly, and this is such a superior effort. More, please!

It occurs to me that even though Lucius has cast Obliviate (or perhaps because of it) poor Harry is going to spend the next few hours wondering why his arse hurts.

Good Lucius, though. I can see him doing that.

Well that was quite disturbing and twisted. I didn\'t think Lucius wouldn\'t touch him, hell I didn\'t even think Lucius would use Imp. To. Too bad Harry couldn\'t fight it... and that the memory was obliviated. *Twitch* Ick, getting raped by a cane. Ouch, ick, and Ew.

I\'ll never look at snakes and canes the same way again O_O

Anyway, VERY well written and you had Lucius very in character.