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I love the way this is turning out and can't wait to read on.

Wow, very good. I like this fic a lot, i cringed when Harry called out for \'Cho\'. Eww... lol


Love it! - Jessica

very good.

Hi,

while your Story has so far giving an incredible (and very scary) look into Snape\'s psyche, I\'d very much also like to read \"And if that Looking Glass gets broke\" which at least seems to exist according to the chapter menu of adultfanfiction.net. Alas there\'s not text in there...

Really hoping that there is more,
A.

Ok, I have gone from one website to anohter to try to read your works and on each, I\'ve seen your comments about flames. Well, wil will have a partial flame in it--sorry.

Your writing is excellent. It ranks with Cybele and Telanu and Minx...::sighs::...

But how it\'s posted SUCKS!!! I can\'t find ANY site that has a properly uploaded HMTL text of the fics. They all have these odd ass symboled throughout them (Ususlly, this means you work on a Mac, not on a proper HMTL -coding program or the program you work with is like Microsoft Word and your \"style\" (see Word help for more details) is all effed up and doesn\'t transfewr properly to HTML.

Also, None of these freaking wonderous stories of yours are linked together! I have to keep trying to go back to this one site you have (I think on Death Crurse dot com) and look at the story arc list in order ry try to disecern the proper continuity of fics! Then I try to go to another site and see if it\'s any better and I still don\'t know what the hell is going on!!!

So....(big sigh)...I hate bringing up problems and then just ranting and not offering a proper solution, so, my suggesstto yto you is to just create a Yahoo Group with all your fics posted as files. You can sort and categorize the story arcs (and maybe add Part 1, 2, 3, 4, etc to their titles...) and then people can join the group when they find your superb writings and then they can read and review and comment on the message board....ahh, it would be easy and convenient for all! And if you are worried about adult content and all that crap, then don\'t. If you are hosting your own work, there is nothing worting with NC-17 fics and such on a Yahoo group. There are TONS of them. Who the hell is going to go threough all the yahoo groups and then decide to sue little ole you onbehalf of Miss Rischer Than The Queen Herself JKR???

Anywho....I\'ve added your author profile to my fanfiction.net favs and will check back occassionally to see what you get together. Cheers!

I *greatly* enjoyed this storyline of yours and am looking forward to devouring the J. Alfred Prufrock Arc next. Keep writing! You mustn\'t let us languish in the pits of despair (at least not from a lack of story from you ;)

LD: Oh gods, more water works.
Karen: Wow, tis ris really excellent... but where is the rest of chapter four?! I need resolution, a satisfactory conclusion...
LD: I need snogging!
Karen: Somehow, I don\'t think that would happen in this story... it is so psychological, and I think Lupin knows what is going on, or at least he suspects.
LD: He can\'t know \"what\'s going on\" because he doesn\'t know what happend.
Karen: Fine, than he knows that Severus is angsting for Harry. Good enough?
LD: Good enough! Kar Karen: So back to the point... Love it, want the rest.

flawless and sensual. dark and beautiful. hat\'s off!

Gorgeous story.

I really love your writing! I\'m so glad you continued this! Please write more soon < 3