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person Sabrina
schedule July 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I think Snape should give her a really good hard spanking. Especially since she\'s already lying on her stomach.
person Anon
schedule July 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I think there should be a lot of spanking involved. It\'s good cause it\'s painful and somewhat humiliating, but it\'s not damaging either.
person Sabrina
schedule July 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Last chapter was great! I need to see what happens next, so write, write, write!
person Kenly Sekuri
schedule July 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You know I love this, but I thought I\'d tell you aga ^.^ ^.^ Is he gonna make her live in his room forever? At some point, Malfoy should be brought in. :P Maybe Snape has words with him or something? :P Again, GREAT! ^.^
person Anon
schedule June 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It\'s great! Please update soon!!!!
person Lori
schedule June 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Woo Hoo! Looks like the tables are turned now. This should be interesting!
person Simone
schedule June 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow, it got really hot and steamy where I am sitting. (okay, that might be connected with the fact that it\'s very hot in Germany right now and on top we just had a rainstorm --> humidity)

Very nice chapter, exactly what Dr. Simone ordered. ;-)
And I am jealous of the chocolate syrup.
Since Severus thinks a spanking is in order too, I can only say: Hurry up! *winks*

Since you wanted suggestions, here it comes:
as I said before, I like dominant Snape (a lot!). But a lot of times he started out dominant in other fics I\'ve read, then developed feelings and got too fast too Vanilla and mushy. I know he can develop feelings (hey, I\'m a romantic at heart too), but is this a reason to turn all lovey-dovey? Especially when he ioo soo sexy when dominant.
So I ask you to please avoid this particular \"trap\", unless you want to go there that is.

I hope you don\'t mind me saying this, since I don\'t know where you want to go with this. And if I step over the line, tell me please. But I simply think that in a fic Snape can be both, dominant and in love, and pulling it off to incorporate both in a good fanfic is a special feat.

Simone *thinks of other bribes to give to speed up the progress of the fic*
person Simone
schedule June 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Although I\'m more a fan of dominant Snape (that\'s what I was waiting for originally), I found this Chapter curiously sexy.
Still, I\'m looking forward to see the tables turned (I will see it, won\'t I?).
As you were asking for suggestions, I\'d like to see Snape spanking her. (hey, you asked)

Simone
person Lori
schedule June 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh my!! I certainly hope there will be another chapter yet today and that you don\'t leave us hanging for long!
person Simone
schedule June 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh please, please write fast!
I want to see him extract payment from her hide. ;-)
And I\'m looking forward to the chocolate sirup being put to good use.

Simone