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person Carolyn
schedule July 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Why, oh why does Severus never throw a Carolyn to the bed/floor/couch/chair/ground and make made passionate love to her?
Sigh...Would you please build me a Severus of my own?

Can you tell I love the story? The only faults I could find were spelling rammrammar...and that\'s just the way I am. If you\'d ever like anything read for mistakes like that just let me know.

I just emailed a friend in England who is just gonna love this story!
person Clara
schedule July 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
yay! atlast they became couples:) great chapter!!
person Kenly Sekuri
schedule July 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love this. It\'s so heart-wrenching. And the cat thing!! LOVE IT! That\'s like THE funniest thing! Though... It\'s not so funny when it\'s ~your~ stuff. :P
person Kenly Sekuri
schedule July 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It\'s about damned time the fool realizes his brain and his heart are talking amongst themselves!! he better hurry or he\'ll loose her! i\'m glad i can help. and don\'t worry, \'Kendra\' will be well taken care of!! *wink wink*
person Lori
schedule July 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Bravo! Bravo! Excellent chapter! Way to go Kendra\'s Mum! Rip him a new one! LOL!

I must say, you are very talented in describing the emotions the two of them were feeling. Not every writer can do that!
person Lori
schedule July 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Noo tho the Author:

I tried to e-mail you privately, and the e-mail came back to me, so I
person glindatrisstt
schedule July 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love this !! 2 Severus\', bloody brilliant, that !! Keep the chapters coming...........
(all puns are purely in your own dirty little mind)

Glinda ^_^
person Lori
schedule July 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter!n\'tn\'t worry it\'s not the usual material. I, personally, like to have SOME story with it, or I lose interest. I can\'t wait to see where you go with this. Should be quite a reunion between the two.
person Persephone
schedule July 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Quite impressive for a first fic, Kudos and please continue!
person Sabrina
schedule July 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I loved this last chapter. I have to confess I didn\'t really like the Lucius/Draco thing that much, but you moved past it really well. Hurry up with the next chapter!