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person Deb >^..^< .
schedule February 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 15... This was WELL WORTH THE WAIT!!! Hermione is full of surprises & has given Voldy a run for his money, not to mention pissed him off!!!

I am so glad that she got Severus away, but where are they now? Will they have a chance to talk soon? Illy lly like the fact that you had Severus standing up for her even though he was in no condition to do much!!! I hope that she will give him a chance, he more than deserves it!!!

I can\'t wait to see how things go between them & am looking forward to more of your FANTASTIC story!!! Til chapter 16, Deb >^..^<
person PaganPoetry
schedule February 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hello to everyone who has read or reviewed this story. I hope at least some of you read this as I don\'t want to have to post it up in place of the next chapter. I\'m going on holiday for a bit so I won\'t be able to post up the next chapter, I\'m so so sorry, especially as I\'ve left it on such a cliffhanger. Please keep reading and I will try to post up quickly when I get back. Hopefully before the end of february. (Crosses fingers). Thank you so much for the reviews they mean so much to me and certainly encourage me to keep writing. Thanks and SORRY again.
Jen
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person Hermione Malfoy
schedule February 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I\'ve been reading your story for ages but have only just got around to reviewing (sorry). I just want to let you know that I love this story. It is definatly one of my favourites, the narratives very original and unlike most things I\'ve read (especially the Hemrione animagi incident-that\'s brilliant!) The way you describe the characters is beautiful and the emotions they feel come across as being so real. Please keep up the good work.
person Slytherin Secret
schedule February 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another cliffhanger?! You;re so mean sometimes...you could have let them escape. Ah well, I\'m glad you didn;t keep us waiting too long for the explanation or I would have gone mad; my brain hurt trying to figure it out but it makes a lot of sense now it\'s been explained. And Sev\'s been saved (sort of,, I was thinking everyone had forgotten him. I hope him and Hermione make up...or will she Avada Kedavra him? lol...stupid quesiton really considering the beginning of the story; although I just relaised that he\'s not actually mentioned in that openeing bit with Hemrione and Selena. Hmm?! *gives up thinking as brain is hurting again* Don\'t be too long with the next Chapter, luv Jo :o)
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule February 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 14... HOLY MY, this chapter has left me with my thumb nail bitten clear down, but it was well worth the pain I\'ll feel for the next few days!!!

The part about Sir Gary Whittle was very interesting!!! I do believe that the way you explained the reason for her multiple animal change ability made perfect sense!!! I think the between Hermione & Albus that Sir Gary Whittle\'s work will be proven & merit publication!!!

Well I have to say that I am EXTREMELY HAPPY that they have found Severus!!! I do hope that Hermione will be able to get them both out & to safety!!!

With Hermione being the one in charge of the rescue as well as getting him out of the tower I do hope that it will give her some time to dwell on the fact that he deserves a chance to clear himself!!! If he is smart he will tell her that he wants to be questioned under Veratiserum so that there will be no way she can doubt his word!!!

I will be eagerly awaiting chapter 15 to see if they got out okay & to see what happens between him & Hermione!!! Til then, Deb >^..^<
person Slytherin Secret
schedule February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Even though I knew you were going to leave it there I am still most displesed with you Mrs Jenny. That is so mean. Great Chapter though...drunken conversation is always fun. Although the breaking out of Azkanban is not at all good, neither is the trapped Severus (Are you ever going to let him out?) Anyway, thank you for updating and you\'d best do it again before you go away to the sun, sea and sand for a week. Lotsa love, Jo :o)
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 13... WOW, this was a very full chapter!!! A baby, a very sad Severus, a breakout, a returning Hermione & a question yet to be answered!!!

Now that Hermione is back will Albus tell her about Severus after he talks to her about the animagus issue? I am wondering if Hermione will be able to continue to change into different things? I bet an ability like that would be a real advantage in certain situations!!!

Til chapter 14, Deb >^..^<
person spaz141
schedule January 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story, thanks.
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule January 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapters 10-12...... I do hope that Hermione can work through everything so she can go back & Severus can be resc!! !! Oh wait, Albus won\'t let them rescue him SOOOOOO they won\'t know where he is:( I do understand that A wan wants Hermione there when they rescue him, but I don\'t think it\'s right that he is leaving Severus to the hands of Voldy & that BITCH!!! To me this is quite wrong & low, even for Albus with all of his \"I felt it was the right thing to do\" attitude!!! WHY is he so willing to leave him to be tortured for so long?!? PLEASE make his pain stop & get him & Hermione back together, the way they belong!!! Til your next update, Deb >^..^<
person Slytherin Secret
schedule January 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great Chapter! Although I\'m still confused as to why Hermione can change into more than one animal as all other animagi we\'ve met can only change into one...please explain this as it makes my brain hurt trying to figure it out :o) I feel sorry for everyone too....Hermione\'s all alone, Sev\'s all trapped and Harry and Ron miss Hemrione...it\'s all sad. Keep writing though and update soon (as always) xxx