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Yay you got them together :o) I\'m glad Hermione got her emotions out finally. You wrote it wonderfully as you did with them getting back together at the end; yay team Jenny. I didn\'t think it was rushed at all as they may have sent you the bill for their later psychotherapy had you kept them apart any longer and now they are back together they can focus on kicking Voldie\'s ass; although I feel a conversation and an explanation between the two is coming first yes? Great writing as always, love you loads, Jo xxx p.s. put some more of Joanne in; she\'s great. lol, love ya *kiss*

Chapte... ... I am so glad that Severus now knows why Hermione has been acting the way she has towards him!!! If he were able to look at things from another person\'s perspective he would understand, but as it is he is too close to it & will have too many personal feelings get in the way of being objective!!!

I don\'t think that this came across as too rushed at !! !! They have been dealing with their own thoughts & feelings for too long now so I feel it is only fitting that the time has come for them to deal with each other!!! Words from a poem, spoken or in this case from a song can be the key to bringing to the surface what a person may want to keep hidden & festering!!! I think that the song you chose was PERFECT!!! The words were just what Hermione needed to hear to realize that she needed to move on & start living again!!!

THANK YOU for not waiting any longer, they don\'t deserve any more suffering!!! I am glad that she went to him & I am looking forward to them talking & working through this!!! They both have hurts & thoughts that they need to express so that they can be together again, the way they should be!!! Til chapter 18, deb >^..^<

I\'m glad Hermione is moving on! I hope her and Sevrus will work things out and get back together! Please update again and soon!

Tiffany

Chapter 17 - I didn\'t read rushed, and I am greatful. The process of Hermione finally starting to grieve was profound. Well written, thanks.

Excellent darling! I loved it. I wish I had convinced you to stay online now and update. I really like the idea of the ancestors (yummy yummy ancient magic meddling), and I\'m glad they are safe at Hogwarts. Now to get them back together.....*Slytherin mind begins to plot*; and you know how good I an at that :o) Your description of Dumbledore was so funny, and very true. Please update as soon as you can (I know you have another Chapter finished) Love you lots, Jo xxx

hapter 16... Thank You for updating!!!

I really like the way you had Albus explain things about wandless magic to Hermione!!! I just wish he would tell her to get her head together & believe that Severus is innocent!!! I know she has been through a lot, but she needs to end her self-pity & think of all that Severus has been through!!!

My heart is breaking for Severus!!! I am hoping that he will offer to take Veratiserum so that she will believe him!!!

Can\'t wait for MORE!!! Til chapter 17, Deb >^..^<

I realize her parents died and all, but she is being so unreasonable. She won\'t even listen to him. I think it was someone polyjuiced that kill her parents, not Severus. Hope she ge clu clue soon.
Keep writing.

Chapter 16 - it\'s just been a sad chapter day all around. I feel for Severus, he doesn\'t know what\'s going on and Hermione...she\'s on her way to alcoholism? Interesting story, thanks.

YAY!!! Not a major cliff hanger (like u threatened) but a great update....nice combination. keep it coming or poking will commence. Extensive magic on Hermione\'s half. More on that please.....t\'is interesting. How long are you going to taunt HG and SS beflettletting them get back together? It\'s so cruel...although as they are merely your pupptes they must dance to your tune wish I suppose (love that saying). Anyway, loved it as always and (as usual) can\'t wait for more. Love ya lots Jo xxx

that was just so exciting, thanks.