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for Justifiable Vengeance

by QueenC

person Bella Snape
schedule October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was dark, but I loved the brilliant twist at the end. I thought that Draco was dead. Very good.
person Esmeralda
schedule October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was exquisite! great work! I'll be looking for more of your fics now :)
person Hermioneg123
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a fantastic twist. I positively loved it. Two twists in one story to be exact. I usually HATE the main pairing in this fic, but I thought that it was well done and didnt question. Keep up the good work. Hope to see some more stuff from you soon.
person Ami
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, wow! My goodness that was a great read! Awesome work! ^_^

~Ami
person twistedmint
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow... i love the twists and turns you put in there... it\'s absolutely amazing
person Emily
schedule January 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful. Eeire, but absolutly wonderful. Very painful to read, the innermonolouge really traps the reader into Hermionie\'s mind and her dead, fear, pain, but most of all helplessness. I can truly understand how traped she feels, by your simple manipulation of words. I complement you on this peice. Thrilling yet depressing, this stoas aas affected me. I applaude at your wonderful ending, and how simply it was put, yet it was so powerful I read it atleast five times before I leaned back into my chair in shock. I complement you on this story, and insist that you keep writing. This world needs more good writers, like you.
person Jayme
schedule July 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Just want to say that was amazing and brilliant!! You should get some kind of award for that! :)
person France
schedule July 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ie toe to agree with all of the reviews already here - great twist with Draco being Hermione\'s husband - although I don\'t usually like stories of Draco being
a good guy. I loved how you wrote Lucius - brilliant!!
person Jez
schedule July 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was brilliant. i have to say that those last two lines took a good story and made it into a great story (in my opinion). i loved the way you wrote that i really thought that Hermione had kd Drd Draco, although the fact that you never mentioned the husbands name bothered me i didn\'t even consider that it was going to be Draco. i thought this story was great!
person Amaya Meda
schedule June 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was truly amazing. Such a story could have only come from a great mind. From a writer to a writer, I give you congradulations on a job well done, as well as my \"thanks!\" for a story worthy of it\'s appeal to Aristotle\'s definition of Tragedy. I will most definitely be looking for more stories under your name.