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by Annabella

person Anon
schedule April 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Anon
schedule October 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Anon
schedule September 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! I love the surprise of having her husband revealed, and I love the pairing! I really hope you write more on this, as I believe you are very talented, and have a great thing going!
person serpensortit
schedule June 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAY! You picked the good one...although before the new Harry Potter film came out and I had a weird dream about Lupin I would have disagreed. Funny things dreams. Great start to a fic, \'I\'m only wearing this dress once\' Imagine if they had been caught and Remus held her to that at the next cerimony. \'She was very nervous as the doors opened, then she sighed and walked down the eisle in her birthday suit. Mwhahahah! Cheers and please write more. And hey if you prefer your suitor why not write one for e toe too...and er a little one for Sirius too? I like em all hey what can I say.

Peace out ~*serpensortit*~
person HERMIONEANDSNAPE4EVEVA!!
schedule December 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
no no No NO NO NO!!!!!!! *WHINE* it was supposed ta be SEVERUS!!!!!!! it just makes sense, sev and mione NOT lupin hmph!!! not fair *whine* not right *whine* u did it all wrong......... oh well *sniff* it better be a good story then!!! ;)

ps not a flame *whimper* plz don\'t yell at me :(
person Jennifer
schedule January 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I liked the story, though i didnt care for hte husband truth be told. other than that, i liked it alot.
person Lav
schedule December 26, 2002 at 12:00 AM
AWW!!!! How cute!! :D
person Rose
schedule December 25, 2002 at 12:00 AM
Hey, just wanted to tell you this is a great start. As for the pairing, Severus definitely. I just love Alan Rickman, plus Snape is my favorite HP character anyway. Please keep up the great work! Btw, I have posted a few of my fics on here as well. If you want you can take a peek at them. There are two HP/BtVS crossovers in the Buffy section. As well as a Galaxy Quest fic in the Misc. Movies section, and a Sense and Sensibility fic in the books section. Hope you choose my fave pairing for this fic, but I will read it no matter which you choose. :)

Rose
person RedBnj
schedule December 23, 2002 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I like your story, but Lupin! He's over the hill, well, actually the cliff! However, it is your story, but I think it would have been better if you paired "Mudblood" with someone her own age!