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for Intertwined Lives

by cathankitten

person arcee
schedule August 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Boy I was not exspecting that .I can\'t wait to see what you do with this .Write more soon pppppppppppppppllllllllllllllllllllllllllllleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaasssssssssssssssssssseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
person chris
schedule July 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
will you please update soon!!!!
person SKY DRAGON
schedule July 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
intetesting story update soon
person armitage
schedule July 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
you should wright more
person Jaimi
schedule July 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i would be glad to be your beta reader. i already love you writing style and would love to help if i can
person Jessica
schedule July 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I really suck at giving reviews so basically, I like this fic very much and really want to see what happens next.
person Nick Dipalma hater
schedule June 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve got to kill you. \"Why?\" you ask? BECAUSE I WANT MORE!!!!!!!
person chris
schedule June 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS A GRATE STORY YOU SHOULD RIGHT MORE!!!!!!!!
person YVE
schedule June 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great Storyline, but it feels like too much stuff has been left out.
I hope the next chapters fill in the gap
person BakaChan
schedule June 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ooooohhhhh interesting! keep it comming