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ftorytory keep it up

Neat but the Nephew makes me think of Toms snake.

MORE!!!!

Ooh! Whoever Narcissa\'s friend was had to be in on some plot to get Draco pregnant - that cake she insisted on making must have done it.
I presume that part of whatever was in the cake also is what is blocking both Lucius & Draco\'s memories of the event too.
I find myself wondering which name will Harry take when he does change it? Malfoy or Lupin or both?
And what is wrong with Sev\'s nephew?
Mysteries, mysteries...

Please carry on soon!

I have just been consideering some of the plot details that seem slightly odd to me. This seems to be set in Harry\'s third year, is the whole mass-murderer-escapee canon plot going on somewhere in the background? It would make everything all that more comlicated.

You seem to have a talent for tangled plots don\'t you? Draco\'s pregnant, memory-blocked & it seems to be Lucius\' child? How is Narcissa involved in this situation? Harry has to get to know his fathers as well & suport his brother. Not to mention that Dumbledore is being a manipulative old bastard who toys with everyone\'s lives.

I\'ve only seen the pairing of Remus & Lucius only a couple of times, both smutfics & one of those was a threesome that included Severus who was a vampire in it.

Anyhow, this looks interesting. Please carry on with it, I\'d love to see more.

Please write more! How can you stop it there? I have to know what happens next!

I\'ve read your fic and...welll..what can I say?
I loved!

Just wonderful ^_^

Didn\'t expect that!!!! More soon!!!!

i really like this story it works out well but i dont get it is severus the dad or is it lucis???(dont know how it is spelled)