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for Intertwined Lives

by cathankitten

person emma elizabeth pressnell
schedule February 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great story, however parts of the chapters are missing which spoals the flow.
schedule October 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this seems to be a very good story and i cant wait for the update :D...but there are some chapters that seem either unfinished or missing something at the end so sometimes its a little confusing...other then that its good so far!
person oooo
schedule April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooooo me likey! :P
person wyccegurl
schedule August 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm intrigued by this story and how it's all going to play out. I hope that you intend to finish it. Is there a way that can get notification when you update?
person Carmella
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sweet man or CHicky! That was great can we please get the rest I am bitting at the bit already!
person beybladejade
schedule March 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooooh please update soon
person :gasps:
schedule February 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG this is a BIG HUMONGOUS SURPRISEEE!!!!!!!!
person Merrideth
schedule February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please continue. This story is a little confusing, but interesting. How did Narcissa make Draco pregnant with Lucius\' son? Why is Sirius there? And what is it about Nage that is so familiar to Harry?


Merrideth
person HIYaH!!!
schedule November 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
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person Hyperbole
schedule November 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great, Draco is being tortured because his mother was plotting to get him pregnant! And why was she planning that when he\'s so young? As a result of her stupidity she\'s affecting the lives of not two but three Malfoy children (yeah while Harry wants to identify himself with Lupin he\'s still part Malfoy too isn\'t he?).
I\'m glad Draco doesn\'t want to alter the parentage of the baby, it\'s obvious he still loves and respects Lucius despite this event.
I wonder what\'s wrong with Nage?