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for Hope

by SSprincess

person Anon
schedule April 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Anon
schedule July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person lyttylyst
schedule March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
email me when you update dammit
person v_sev
schedule April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
very good work . XXXX keep it up
person Tarny-Lee
schedule December 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hi my name is tarny-lee but my friends call me Tarny i think your story is really good it is very dramatic and i wish u would finish it because i keep wanting to read it all over again i think i have read it like 10 times it so good as soon as you have finished the next chapter please send it to me i can\'t wait for it

Yours Truely
Tarny-Lee Edwards
person Anon
schedule October 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I know a victim of rape. A close friend of mine was date raped. Because she was afraid of what her family would say, I was the only one she told. I let her know my feelings but had to respect hers. So for the next three years, we were forced to attend classes with a very EVIL young man. She never told another soul until last year when she got counseling. He is in a correctional facility now for rape of a 13 year old girl. I never told my friend this. If she found out, it was from someone else. You are right about the victim keeping quiet. They would rather no one know than to confront their attacker and feel less in the eyes of others. It also made her feel stronger to be around him somewhat. Something like HA! Do what you want to me but I am still strong enough to make it and I am stronger thou. ou.
Dont let other people\'s flames get you down. You say you know first hand and that is what is important. Write what you know. If these halfwits had an ounce of sense, they would realize that real life is not TV with crusading women out to save the world. Some of us need to save ourselves first. YOU GO GIRL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Anon
schedule October 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
good job
person pingu
schedule September 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
dis i a good story is der gonna b nemore i hope so :D
person Andrian
schedule July 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hello,
Read through you story...It has promise but needs to be a bit more further developed (slow down a little).

Sorry but I cannot help but wonder (not more than once) have you read my story Damaged Goods? (on another site of course not this one)

Quote:\'I am damaged goods\'

Themes run deep and close yet the themes are in themselves obitary and universal.

Sigh



No offense and hello Corazon

Andrian
person Mariana
schedule July 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i do think that the story is great at least 1st chapter sorry for my stupidity but i can not find out how to change of chapter if you can please answer me to M.Filipa@megamail.pt