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for Normal Jealousy

by Flooks

person Krispy
schedule June 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
it\'s great! you gotta keep writing!! I wanna see how jealous Potter gets!!
person Jayme
schedule June 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Don\'t put yourself down! I thought that was pretty good...it has a nice plot...keep going! I want more! :)
person Krystal
schedule June 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Excellent work! Keep it going! I want to see what happens next! :)
person CiNdY
schedule June 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i love it, D/G is one of my favourite pairings especially with a ous ous harry. and not just that, ur fic is very well written, believable, and amazing, please you have to to continue, and update ASAP
person Nameless
schedule June 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Liking it so far...

NL
person reviewer
schedule June 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
well, i hope u don\'t make harry the bad guy in this. too overdone. i don\'t care what the ships are as long as harry isn\'t the villain. U know what\'s really missingin the smut world? A H/G/D scene. I mean its always giny with one or the other. it should be wthemthem both, at least once :)
person Angelic_Devil
schedule June 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Looks promising. Update soon.
person sammy
schedule June 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love the story
It is soooooooooooooo cool
person Krystle
schedule June 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Where\'s the rest??? It was sooo good. I can\'t wait to read more.
person DEM
schedule June 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
NEAT! please write more. i love it. and i want to know what happens when Harry gets them.