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for Normal Jealousy

by Flooks

person Yui
schedule March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
sorry to say this, but this is not the best story I\'ve read (but its mutch bether than if I was writing one).
I didn\'t understand everything perfectly, but that may be my falt since I\'m
not the worlds best person in english (I\'m norwegian)
still I want to see the end, I have a feelig that the story will get better,
so dont stop, keep on with the good work,
and I\'ll keep on reading
person Malana Draconis
schedule March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG YOU HAVE TO WRITE MORE PLEASE~!!!!
person Draco luvr
schedule January 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is really good!

PLEASE CONTINUE! I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!

PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE!
person Draco Malfoy luvr
schedule January 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, this is good!

I know it\'s out of the ordinary, but I hate Harry Potter! I mean, he needs anger management, and he\'s such a. . a. . .goody two-shoes!

I prefer Draco. He\'s sexy!

This is a really good fic! Please, update soon!
person Liz
schedule October 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow... this sounds very promising. I insist you continue!!
person Sidhe
schedule August 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Not bad... an interesting combination. There aren\'t too many draco/ginny stories out there. Try not to make Ginny seem too desperate and make sure Draco doesn\'t seem to willing, though, when you write the next chapter, because that will just ruin the story by taking away from their characters. I did enjoy it, keep writing. I\'ll be sure to check frequently to see when you update it.
person nmffnurse
schedule July 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Can\'t wait to see your 2nd chapter!!!
person darla
schedule July 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow, i think you\'re wrong! this isnt total crap but kinda interesting! (\'kay, i\'m kind of a ginny/draco shipper, but whatever...) please go on writing! from what it looks like this is going to become FUN! (don\'t make the g/d part too short, please!) and as its rated nc17.....*evilgrin* ya know what i\'m thinking of, right? so,waysways, it guess you got my point......don\'t make your fans wait too long! :o)
darla
person Renee
schedule June 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
V. nice so far. I love D/G so I hope to see some more soon!!!
person juvenile
schedule June 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
God i love it.

Continue please!