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for Normal Jealousy

by Flooks

schedule February 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's not crap. I quite like your concept. The only suggestion I have is your formatting. It could be a little fine tuned to make things flow a little better, but other than that it's lovely. ^_^
person billy
schedule August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Update soon, it was good. I cant wait to see Ginny and Draco together.
person a_s
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
personally, i get distracted when i read about people kissing from the perspective of someone who doesn\'t want them to kiss. i\'m also can\'t imagine saying ginny\'s last line. however, it\'s a nice story, really, it\'s a little different to the usual setup and i like that a lot. your description of ginny\'s & harry\'s feelings after they separated feels so real, keep it up that way, make every event in the story feel so real. and... write anonther chapter ! cheers, a_s
person Kitiara Starfire
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
pretty good story.
person Xharah
schedule March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Man, i like that soo much... It was brilliant...
Please write more as soon as u can, pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.
A big Kiss, hope 2 hear from u soon
person john the heavy
schedule February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
write more motherfucker this story got potential!(seriously)
person Jibel
schedule December 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey, I like it..
it definetly aint bad...
when are you gonna update again ...
you made me anxious..:P
greetz chantie
person alecto
schedule September 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ACHH! why have you ceased to write this story? you must continue.
person Squirt1
schedule May 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW! This is really good, you really have to continue writing I mean its amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I like the snogging part v. funny! So write more!!!
schedule April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love it, i\'ve been rereading it for some time now.. please post more!