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February 20, 2020 at 12:00 AM
omg. i'm going through cleaning up encoding errors as part of AFF's archive-cleaning effort, and when i read your story i actually cried at the end. good stuff! you write very well; it was good reading all the way through. thank you!
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December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very very well-written.
I can't quite tell you what appeals to me, because I do not know, but there surely is something.
The ending was so beautiful it made me cry..
I can't quite tell you what appeals to me, because I do not know, but there surely is something.
The ending was so beautiful it made me cry..
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February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter four was... was....
* passes out *
* Murmurs *
Intoxicating and arousing.
* passes out *
* Murmurs *
Intoxicating and arousing.
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January 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is pretty lame.....
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September 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
An interesting story...gave it four stars
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June 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Your story was, without a doubt, the most surprising and touching thing I\'ve ever read.
It was surprising because, when reading the first few chapters, all I expected was for Susan to have wild sex with many different peophrouhroughout the story. And I hate to admit it, but I almost expected her to be a Mary-Sue. Luckilye wae wasn\'t anywhere near that horrible territory. But no... Instead of six chapters of sex, there comes a wonderful turning point with The Boy Who Thinks The Sun Shines Out Of His Arse that makes, quite possibly, the most emotionally satisfying plot I\'ve ever laid eyes on. That was thoroughly touching.
And for some reason, that was my SECOND favorite aspect of the story. The idea I loved most-or ideas, so to speak-were the gaes, es, the free and graceful gazelles that Susan kept imagining. Of course, the third favorite property of the story was the humor. I laughed constantly through the earlier chapters, especially whenever Hermione was involved. She is a good character for jokes, no doubt.
To summarize this GIGANTIC review: I really, truly, honestly, soulfully enjoyed this fanfic, and I hope you\'ll be able to write again soon, because you are an amazing author, and you deserve every bit of praise I can give you, and a little more for luck.
It was surprising because, when reading the first few chapters, all I expected was for Susan to have wild sex with many different peophrouhroughout the story. And I hate to admit it, but I almost expected her to be a Mary-Sue. Luckilye wae wasn\'t anywhere near that horrible territory. But no... Instead of six chapters of sex, there comes a wonderful turning point with The Boy Who Thinks The Sun Shines Out Of His Arse that makes, quite possibly, the most emotionally satisfying plot I\'ve ever laid eyes on. That was thoroughly touching.
And for some reason, that was my SECOND favorite aspect of the story. The idea I loved most-or ideas, so to speak-were the gaes, es, the free and graceful gazelles that Susan kept imagining. Of course, the third favorite property of the story was the humor. I laughed constantly through the earlier chapters, especially whenever Hermione was involved. She is a good character for jokes, no doubt.
To summarize this GIGANTIC review: I really, truly, honestly, soulfully enjoyed this fanfic, and I hope you\'ll be able to write again soon, because you are an amazing author, and you deserve every bit of praise I can give you, and a little more for luck.