Phew, am I glad that is over. But more trouble in paradise, Hermione is going to kick Ron's arse and I have a feeling that there are going to be 4 very unhappy Slytherin's.
I just hope that Hermione gets the help she needs and can work out a way through this.
Wow that got good I'm glad Ron has accepted them and Hermione relationship and stepped up like he did with the reporters. It's the most logical and a wonderful cover until she is ready to come out and let the world know not like they have any right to know her personal business . Maybe we need another red head in the mix lol there is so much he could learn 🤣 please update again soon I can't wait !!!!!
Ahhhhhh! Quite the roller coaster ride. My head is spinning. Too bad it wasn't Draco that found Cormac, he would have just gotten rid of the body. 🤪. But now it gets interesting and queasy with the press involved and Ron being dragged in. I don't know which way to turn. Can't wait to see what happens next. ðŸ˜â¤ï¸
Yay for Draco. The first section made me shout aloud with glee that he now knows he is not being passed up. Even better now that he knows he will not imminently lose Harry either.
But after all of that joy you go and leave us with a cliffe like that. I need to know what happens next but at the same time I am terrified.
I may have to read the next chapter through my fingers. This story really is a rollercoaster for the emotions but I eagerly await what you will give us next.
Kayleigh xxx
Um... cliffhanger death! I have to know. Also, this chapter was well worth the wait!
There is definitely no better way to start a story / chapter that 'Draco Malfoy was wanking.' Oh I love it! And I love the turn you take with Astoria and Draco!
Probably said it before, but I really cherish your writing style. Makes me fall into the story right away every time. Sometimes with ff stories I start skipping parts to get on with the story. But your writing has me drinking in every word.
This chapter made my weekend! Thanks!!
xx Billy
Ps I hope this wont get too dark! Ohhh Hermione! O.o
You had me all lured in. I was feeling all the happy vibes. Even Draco and Astoria coming together and Ron and Hermione making up and being friends and then Bam! The last sentence and now I'm scared and nervous and very anxiously awaiting the next chapter.
You are an amazing writer and two keep two stories (or 3 if you count 24) moving forward with all the real world work you're doing is incredible and I salute you. 😊
This is so hot!! Love it
Loved the new chapter.
I definitely needed by Drarry fix. Tbh if the pairing has Draco in it I am there, but Drarry will always be my favourite.
I cannot wait to see where you take this story as you have woven a lot of different characters together and motives.
Eagerly awaiting to see if we hear more from McLaggen and how difficult he could make everything. I am sensing upcoming drama (of the apocalyptic variety)
I am not sure I am entirely comfortable with Hermione thinking that she can become il quatro without talking to Draco. I cannot bear for her to hurt his feelings and I am sure he would feel like she is leaving him and prefers the others. My heart bleeds for our poor broken boy. I want him to have his happily ever after but cannot see what this will be like in this story yet.
I will not doubt your wisdom though and put my trust and faith in your story telling genius.
Thank you for your kind words about my short little smut. Hopefully I can get time to finish the second chapter and I have a lot of half formed stories to be worked on that are longer and involve more actual story.
Kayleigh xxx
Well I guess the truth is always the best way to go. 🤪. Loved the chapter. Still love Drarry the most and they're scene was amazing. Left me all hot and bothered. ðŸ˜. And then the end of the chapter made me smile and sigh..... Can't wait to see what happens next even if I have to wait a couple of weeks for it. Thanks for making my night.