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by BooBack

person DB1
schedule January 15, 2022 at 12:00 AM

 

Great chapter!!! 

Oooh I hope she has something treatable in the muggle world!!  
 

person Nari-Chan
schedule January 15, 2022 at 12:00 AM

So are the pure blooded not so pure ? Hmmm who would have known that have such a dirty little secret, I love this story so much and your writing style I'm super invested in the characters and truly can't wait to see what's going to happen next  after this rollercoaster of a chapter your quite good at writing the bitter sweetness of life. Please update soon I can't wait !!!  

schedule January 14, 2022 at 12:00 AM

Another amazing chapter 😩 I could cry. The heart strings. ALL of mine were pulled. I have no idea what the end means but to say im excited is an understatement. Literally every change of scene I was nervous for Astoria. My heart literally stopped at "Friday the thirteenth." The depth, the love, the emotion, the smut ðŸ˜ CHEF'S FREAKING KISS 🤪

My hat's off to you, I absolutely adore this story. Almost as much as Draco adores Hermione 🥰 if anyone can help Astoria it's our beloved bushy haired genius, so thank you for another great chapter and I'm already waiting with excitement for the next one :)

schedule January 14, 2022 at 12:00 AM

OK, I admit it. I cried, I cheered, I wooped and even did a little fist bump. Then I cursed you for leaving us with such a cliffy. 

Must you torture us so????? 

As always, a beautiful chapter that has left me hungering for more. I now have all these wild theories running around in my head and all I know for sure is that you are devious. Dare I say an evil genius. So I know whatever comes next will be spectacular. 

Kayleigh xxx

person Smile317
schedule January 14, 2022 at 12:00 AM

Sobbing!!  ðŸ˜­ Such an emotional roller coaster. So much good and so much sad. And then thrown for a loop at the end again with Muggle Ailments. I'm just holding out hope for the happily ever after for everyone. And I also like epilogues. 😜

person CassiopeiaHastur
schedule January 8, 2022 at 12:00 AM

So great - i Love How you build their characters while still including lots of steemy action 

schedule January 4, 2022 at 12:00 AM

OH MY GOSH! I have to say I love the way you chose to go with this story, it's absolutely perfect! And I finally caught up!! I still haven't even gotten a chance to look at ur new story yet! 😭 I've been trying to write myself and I've been bouncing around 3 stories currently, but have some writers block. I can't wait to read ur new one tho!! But I SWEAR if u kill off Astoria I will never forgive u!! Also I'm so happy Astoria and Harry finally did stuff they're a pair that I always thought would be cute together. 
I would just like to commend you for such a great story :)) it's nice to read such good content and I'd read your stories even if there wasn't any smut. I'm excited and sad to know it's coming to an end soon, but luckily you've got more stories on the way. 
Sorry for my inactivity :( I've been super busy, but just know I'll never stop supporting what you write! 😁❤️
Xoxo - Bella

schedule January 3, 2022 at 12:00 AM

OMG..... truly evil to leave it there. 

I am enjoying all of the side shags that seem to be happening for the likes on Ron and Ginny, but I am still super invested in our main six/seven. 

And as for your not at the beginning of this chapter (13), I am still here and I do trust you to lead us to safety. 

Kayleigh xxx

person Nari-Chan
schedule January 1, 2022 at 12:00 AM

Soo Happy to see you back and posing I love this story so much and I have fallen in love with the poly dynamic you give them. It's beautiful and touching and delicious and delightful to read i am  always looking forward to see that you have posted another chapter and when you do I get so excited so plet keep up the wonderful work and update again soon 

person Wowow
schedule January 1, 2022 at 12:00 AM

Omg. Such a lovely uodate with a cliffhanger. Poor Astoria. Poor ALL of them!!