This is the first HP erotic fiction I've read and it really showed me how appropiate the characters and their dynamics are for an erotic story, specially with Hermione and Draco at the beginning of their encounter. I haven't read the books in a long time but their dialogue felt really genuine for their characters including the swearing and the teasing. Apart from that, the bits of humor were also really good, like when Pansy's pops up surprising Hermione or when Malfoy and Zabini just blatantly admit that they would take the credit for Hermione's work.
Fantastic!
OMG the twist! Great story and awesome smut :)
Wow. Usually I read these at night before bed but I had some spare time before Sunday dinner since no one has gotten here yet. Big mistake🤪. Now all hot and bothered with wet knickers and no relief in sight. You are an amazing writer and I can't wait to see more from you in the future. And thank you for the recommendation on the other story. Hope to see you again soon. 😊
Oh yeah. Love the twist at the end. 🤪
Wow!! Welcome back with a vengeance. Now I'm all hot and bothered. Can't wait to see what happens next. Thank you. 😅