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by hedwig_927

person NetEl67
schedule July 11, 2023 at 12:00 AM

Please please come back! I LOVE thus story so much! I signed up just for your story, I read it through more than 10 times. Its so well written and special. I love the character development here, and I wanna know what will happen next. Dont leave me like this, Im begging you!

schedule February 7, 2023 at 12:00 AM

Hi,

I read this story now. I thought it's finished. But at this 12th chapter I realized it's not. Anyway, it is really good. I like the story line as well as the juicy parts. I'm looking forward the following chapters. Although I have no idea how can I know if a new chapter is up. 

Thanks for the story so far! :)

person Smile317
schedule April 28, 2022 at 12:00 AM

Still missing you 😔 

person Clr
schedule March 25, 2022 at 12:00 AM

I'm such a huge fan of this story! I hope that you're able to finish it ❤

person Smile317
schedule March 13, 2022 at 12:00 AM

😭😭

person BooBack
schedule January 22, 2022 at 12:00 AM

Hi Hedwig! Sorry it took me so long to get to reading this. It's been a busy week. 😐

I'm glad that you're back with us and writing again but I also understand that life can just get in the way as well. I am married with two kids, have a full time job and I'm studying for my masters degree, but I find writing as a sort of outlet for the stress (or very good procrastination, lol). I hope you get through everything and can balance it all going forward. 🙂

I loved this chapter. When Harry had his realisation in the cave, it just made my heart melt. 🥰 I'm so happy for them, even though they haven't said it yet. I'm excited to see what the gala will be like. I also really liked the bits with Ron and the Weasleys and then later with Blaise and Theo. It just shows that it's not just them. And of course I loved the smut. The end was so sexy even though I was a little sad Draco didn't get to top, but I know he will when he's ready. 😉

Thank you for another lovely chapter and I don't mind either way with length/frequency. Whatever works for your busy schedule. 😊

Xxx

person Nari-Chan
schedule January 20, 2022 at 12:00 AM

So happy to see that your back and I'm sorry life has delt you  some bad news but you seem like a strong person and will push through this and come out of this  stronger and smarter then before, on to the story  loved it sooo much and can't wait to see the twist and turns  that are coming and I'd love this to be long and even a second part when they are older  I simply adore that idea I love when we get an something like that  ! Post as soon your able I'll wait for this delightful story as long as needed 😁😘🤗 may life get better and hope to see you soon!!! 

schedule January 20, 2022 at 12:00 AM

Wow, what a way to come back! 

I'm so sorry for everything that happened and hope you come out of it feeling better soon❤️
I loved loved loved this chapter, i'm such a sucker for the fluffy parts! The part where harry and ron talks really warmed my heart❤️ The smut was amazing as always! I love drunk draco haha

As for the chapters I really don't mind if they are shorter or longer, I have really liked them as they are now but I'm also super excited for this story to continue more frequently haha. Whatever works best for you and your creative process I'm happy with!

Can't wait for more! x

person Smile317
schedule January 19, 2022 at 12:00 AM

I'm so glad you're back. And sorry for everything you've had to go through. You make my life brighter with your stories and I wish things can be the same for you always. Plus I can't believe you're majoring in physics. That just makes everything 10x harder. Could never get through that in school.  As for the story, my heart is bursting 💗. Harry finally realized his feelings now they both just need to say it! 😜. But I know good stories always come with some angst so I'm bracing myself for the next chapters. And there's still the matter of the house and Lucius to get through. As for the end, I love a good epilogue that shows them in later years (still happy) 😊. Thanks for the update. 😁

person yourbestjudy
schedule January 13, 2022 at 12:00 AM

I just started reading this fic again and wow I just remembered how much I loved this plot!!! I have been checking in every now and then to see if you've updated and I really hope you do at some point❤️ no pressure, I get that life is stressful and all. I just think it has so much potential and it warmed my heart🥰