This fic had me captivated from the very beginning! So good!
I love this story, I love all the different elements the auther has put into it. I can only hope that they will continue to update it.
Things are starting to come together quickly. Starting to get nervous. Can't wait to see what happens. Thanks for a great story so far. Take care.
Ahhhh. A nice sweet mellow chapter. I'm guessing a breath of fresh air before more bad things happen.
So many mistakes and typos, i needed to copy them to separately to another writing platform as mobile review cleared itself. It's just going to be list with corrections.
"They had tasked madame Pomphrey" Pomfrey (happens again later.)
"Ron was training hart" hard
"working on her won project" own
"first female, muggle born mistress of magic" Two mistakes, muggleborn is compound word and i think it's minister even if female.
(Side note, does Harry even know how Petunia is as "normal"?)
"inform Fudge" I think you meant Scrimgeour.
"“Get these shoes of.." off
"hold down the ford" fort
Great chapter overall.
Wow!! Such highs and lows all in one chapter. So much going on. But I'm glad the babies are here and they're okay and everyone is okay for now. Now to get rid of Voldemort so that Harry's vision of the future can come true.
I truly hope that you finish this story.... To say that English isn't your first language this is a very well written story and I'm loving the plot twists and turns.. there are a few grammatical issues but easily corrected in my mind without any aggravation and I truly do enjoy reading... I've finished all 49 chapters in 2 days so keep up the good work and please update with a new chapter soon ðŸ˜
Bad Lavender. Things are getting interesting. Can't wait to see Rita go down. Thanks for the great story
Awwww. What a great chapter. Rescuing Dumbledore. Introducing everyone from the veil. And finally a soul bonding. Made me so happy. 🥲Now just getting rid of Voldemort is next. Hopefully that goes as well to. 😜
Wow. Great twist. Didn't see that coming at all. And great idea to have Ron come up with the solution. Help him build his confidence. Feels like we're coming to a big turning point. ðŸ˜