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for Harry’s Undoing

by BrokenHolly

person Jan
schedule December 6, 2020 at 12:00 AM

Interesting story, I'm absolutely loving this new Holly character, though I do wonder why Harry has such a small pickle? Please update chapter 3 soon.

person Jeda26
schedule November 30, 2020 at 12:00 AM

Oh my word, that was another sensationally gloriously gorgeous and wickedly wantonly alluring erotic gem of a new chapter. Harry, sorry Holly is falling into the perfect headspace for Snape to carry forward and continue turning Harry into the perfect feminised sissy femme fatale replacement for his lost love. Particularly loved how Harry/Holly is already completely under his thrall that he readily acquises and adapts to acting and dressing like a sexy naughty school girl with the hots for her teacher and pleasuring him as he desires. 
 

Well, well that is a game changer of a scene with Ginny finding out about Garty and Snape's secret. Wonder if she will be discovered straight away and become another pawn in Snape's plans to corrupt and convert Garry into Holly. Or if she escapes discovery and uses her knowledge to blackmail Harry into being her lover as well at a later date.

 

person Jeda26
schedule November 29, 2020 at 12:00 AM

Hot damn and god have mercy. That was  stunningly sublime and gorgoeusly glorious, wantonly kinky, erotically alluring start to what I sure will an absolute gem of a sissy Harry story. Utterly looking forward to seeing what Snape has in store for Harry next and how far he manages to corrupt and transform Harry into his perfect obediant feminised cock slut, sissy femboy by the time school starts again and whether he is driven by taking advantage of and using the boy' perversions to turn Harry into a replacement for his lost love, a beautiful young red head or raven haired version of Lily as well as means to get vengence on Harry's father.