Minny VS Daphne was the perfect way to end it.
Marvelous and just *chef kiss*
I remember reading this awhile back. Glad you came back to it. Not expecting a child. And what a child. Things could get very interesting. But I'm guessing Harry will still come out of it whole in the end. At least hoping. Can't wait to see what happens next.
I feel like Harry would be overjoyed at getting to start a family. Also, I sincerely hope the dead paart oof "fainted dead" is figurative, as that would just be too stupid. It's probably just a pun, to form the punchline of this excellent story. Thank you, I enjoyed it very much. I would love to read a continuation, even if it's not about marital assassination.
I thought the 1st chapter was hilerious but this was even better. Guessed what was wrong with Daphnie, as it was fairly predictable but wonder how she will react now. Loved the little distraction with Merlin. :)
Its only taken 3 years for her to realise how lucky she is but will she finally accept that she does care for Harry.
Fun and creative story. Well written, though I wish there was a tad more explanation of Harry's anomalous abilities. And that it described some of that "turnabout is fair play" happening "multiple times a day" in more saucy detail. This is ADULT-fanfiction after all, and you've made them such enjoyable characters.
I like so many things about this story, and remember when it was first posted. It was a pleasant surprise to see this oneshot updated. I really hope you continue it!
I especially liked the opening of chapter two echoing the first. If you do a time skip eventually, starting with their child would be fun. Maybe Lily or something less cliché, Artemis, Lara, Maera, and Moria are other naiads or are related to Daphne in Greek Mythology. Daphne seems the type to demand to name their daughter.
"Maera could have been the perfect daughter."
great story had me laughing in tears , thank you
<3 I love this story.
I laughed so hard I cried
Cause she's like why won't you die? Even if she's still in the denial part.
10/10 <3