Femdom and student/teacher sex in the same chapter. You really can't get much better than that and better yet, it was all set up perfectly too. Harry going from worried for his place in Hogwarts to fucking an absurdly hot, dominant, downright dirty older woman?
Nice. Can't wait for more of this pairing in particular, if the story comes back to previous chapters!
Well that was hot and you had already hinted that it was coming. I rather suspected that their activities wouldn't be a total secret from their parents but was slightly surprised it was so soon and how much Lily was excited about it. Wondering how far family activities will end up going.
Anyway the rugby is about to start so keeping it short but another good chapter.
And another kickass chapter, this time with Jasmine? If that wasn't hot enough on its own, especially with how clearly you have Jasmine as a female mirror to Harry (in that sex has quickly become an even bigger part of her life because of how much she enjoys it), it's even better because of Lily.
Not only has she been putting on a show out of some belief that it's good sex education (that's kinda hilarious, ngl), but she's watched them and can't help but getting turned on, even getting a little bit jealous. Holy shit. Can't wait until she can't help herself/her jealousy overwhelms/James disappoints, 'cuz something tells me the Harry/Lily, Harry/Lily/Jasmine chapter's going to be one hell of a read. :)
Another awesome chapter. Once again I like the dynamics beyond just the smut itself, like how both Susan and Hannah are already involved with Justin and Ernie but Justin's just what's expected of Susan and how Ernie's "important" to Hannah, but she hasn't been happy with him in a while and how easy it is for her to sink into things with Neville and Harry.
Definitely makes the ending scene, as kinda depressing as its meant to be out to be a very minor roadblock for Neville. 'Cuz like Harry said, if it's that easy for her to betray Ernie once their relationship clearly isn't going to last. It's just a nice touch to the usual, less involved stuff you can find in most stories.
Everything else was great too. I like that for all Harry "doesn't wanna bang Lily", she's still basically his perfect woman and it was pretty great seeing Harry and Neville with a pair of girls as slutty as they are. The swapping, the sharing, the bisexuality and how easily they both took to going cheek to cheek? Best chapter yet and shows that future chapters have some serious promise.
Looking forward to next weeks update already, dude!
Very funny as Harry struggles to find what works. :) He needs to learn there are more erogenous zones that the groin but he's still pretty inexperienced himself and at least he showed the patience to enough to eventually find her g spot. Hopefully Su will be more relaxed in future, especially if that gives her the confidence and she gets a favourable response from the guy she fancies.
Love that last line to Luna as well.
So that was a change of pace I wasn't expecting but definitely liked. Harry learns a valuable life lesson: just 'cuz it's sex, doesn't automatically make it good. Some partners are notoriously hard to please (which has gotta be rough when you're younger and more prone to pride related injury), you can't always count on vocal partners either and well, really, some people are bound to treat sex differently than you.
Granted treating it like a business transaction almost isn't something you see or hear of oten, but it's amusing as a reader. Plus I liked that Su put Harry through the ringer in trying to get her off, in finding that sideways and from behind is what really gets her going.
Least he has Luna to soothe all those frayed nerves with "normal" sex. XD
Well skilful planning and thought and Neville got his aim. Also Hermione found out she likes and is good at something that doesn't involve books. :)
Good chapter but where do they go now? Is Neville looking to gain more experience with Hermione or simply looking for other girls so he can catch up with Harry?
So Neville managed to talk his way into Hermione's knickers, huh? Smooth, especially considering Hermione's still basically Hermione!
The actual smut was pretty good too. Not quite as kinky or as hardcore as Harry's scenes, but a bit more realistic and signifcantly more gentle which is hot in its own way.
Good update and some nice interactions, not just talking about the smut. Loved the exchange between Luna and Ginny especially while Neville's priming of Hermione was well done. I suspect one line has really slammed the door on any relationship between her and Ron now. ;)
You accidentally posted the chapter twice. :)
But what a chapter to post twice. I mean Katie Bell? Yes, please. Even better is the end reveal that even though her time with Harry was enjoyed, it doesn't scratch any particular itches she has since those are usually scratched in gangbangs.
Her preferred method of stress relief. Which is hot as hell and you can hardly blame Harry for going back for seconds, knowing that. And who knows? Maybe Harry will get the chance to see Katie in action in the future.
In other news, Neville is the definition of a sly dog. :D