hello, I would very much like to be warned of the rest of your story please
Its been a long while since I have found a new story to anticipate being updated!!! Thank you!! Please continue this!!
I love this so much! Please keep going!
I love this so much! Please keep going!
I have to admit that I was a little bit confused by the change of perspective even though you gave the time step, apparently it didn't register for me.
Any, thank you very much for this story! I was so excited to see you only recently started it and there is hope for updates!
With these kind of stories it is always a little strange how quickly emotional development happens, or doesn't happen at all and is just there. The love and affection, physically as well as mentally, are very sudden.But I am excited for the story you are going to make out of this.
The smit... Oh the smut, the lemons, the slash. I must admit that I have read a lot of it, and I really like your writing. Not too fast, as in he put it in, they both liked it, they both came. And not as frawn out emotionally, with three pages of emotional analysis and growth until the reader forgets what is going on. Especially your workings of the triads together and their different attitudes to it were worked out very nicely.
This is the first review I have ever written on any site about any story, and I know it's very long, but I enjoyed it and hope it encourages you to keep the story going.
xo
I'm loving this story! Keep it up!