you are a good writer.. keep it up.. love how Draco is dom.in this one.
I feel like this latest chapter was incredibly rushed. There wasn't any need to cram the whole ordeal into one chapter. Instead, you could have had her capture and imprisonment as one chapter (ending on a mini cliff hanger when Pansy walks in). Then another chapter from her torture and escape, and finally a third chapter for her waking up in St Mungo's.
Nevertheless, I still love the whole idea behind this story and can't wait to see where you go with it.
These chapters are so tense and steamy I love them!!!! I'm so sorry to hear about the death in your family, thanks for uploading a new chapter for us. I'm looking forward for more chapters, especially after you finally have us at the climax (pun intended)
Yeah so happy to see you have returned and I am soooo happy that you are still posting this story. I can't wait to read the next chapter and see where our now reunited and rebond ing . Update again soon !!!!!
Wow that's one way to leave off a story lol please update again soon ! I can't wait to s read what happens next !!!!
Ack! The angst!! But I figured there had to be something left for book 2 to solve. Thank you for sharing and I look forward to the next installment.
Amazing I so happy that you updated and I love what you have added the can not wait to see what you have next please update again soon
I am really looking forward to the next chapters, please update 😀
I appreciate DH is nit repeated. I do wish there would be some elaboration on Ginny's situations. It's a tad odd that she does not seem to be ostracized. Thanks!
I love what you have done so far and I can't wait to see what happens next ! You did a Clif hanger !!!!! Please update soon