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for The Paths We Take

by Luckycharms

schedule September 29, 2019 at 12:00 AM

@Saxman66-

I’m glad to have you back. Unfortunately, your review though did bother me some. I along with my beta are very into history and my beta has even taken several college classes on it and has a minor in classics which is the study of ancient Greece and Rome. I spent hours and days researching every era, and months before that when choosing each era. I have many sources including links and real-life people, and always make sure everything I am writing into this story is factual. I never mentioned the year the Romans conquered England, just that during the time of Cleopatras Reign they only conquered much of England. Osiris is also a made-up character that I implanted for various reasons. Regardless it’s a fictional story where I can do so.  As for the War of The Heavenly Horses, it might not be well known to you, but it is to me and I not only researched heavily that era, but I also watched YouTube videos explaining it in detail, so I had a visual. The group was only present after everyone left which is why Hermione could determine that the remaining troops left only about a day or two before and her book is magical which I was waiting to explain in the story later. She can find any piece of history she wants to. As for Ginny in Rome, she just got lucky because the assassination happened right after, but you are not wrong about the flogging, I just did not want to add it. Now as for the cave man. I have many links that have not only told me but shown me what humans looked like 2.5 million years, which is exactly what I put in the story, nothing more and nothing less. The only thing that I will change is my misspelling of the word conquer which I appreciate you catching for me. Also, it is mentioned in the summary that this story is a Dramione/Blinny story, so Blaise and Ginny will be together eventually. If you could please alter your review or write a new one so information that is not correct for this story does not confused readers, I would greatly appreciate it. Thank you.

person 1_luv215
schedule September 22, 2019 at 12:00 AM

I absolutly love the details of this chapter! So much has happened in such a short span of time but I felt myself entralled with every scene. I have to say though, I too was not expecting Ginny to go off like she did and instead thought it would be Hermione but I like the interation. Poor Draco though he just cant catch a break lmao. Cant wait to see where you take them next!

person 1_luv215
schedule September 8, 2019 at 12:00 AM

This story seems so good! The idea of multi-eras is unique and very bold. Your wirting style is also amazing. I fell like I'm really there. Can't wait until next Sunday to see what the past holds for Dramione and Blinny.

schedule September 2, 2019 at 12:00 AM

I am currently into time travel BIG time and really like the idea of how they react outside of their normal time interested to see where this goes, if this will be a slow pace or a quickie, and please keep updating!