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for The Paths We Take

by Luckycharms

person 1_luv215
schedule October 27, 2019 at 12:00 AM

WOW!  Ok where do I even begin? That was a lot for one chapter and my god I loved it so much! Molly and Narcissa's fight was very well done but Harry! Harry my man came out of no where and shut them down perfectly! I got so excited when he announced himself and began ripping into them!

And holy hell I was not expecting Rowle of all people to help them! That backstory was fire! I have no idea how you came up with it let alone make it a cliffhanger IN THE MIDDLE OF THE CHAPTER which it almost never done! But BRAVO! That was awesome! And Luna! God I love her and her weirdness. I wonder what is going to happen next. Will Harry finally tell the group what he experienced and saw? Is Thorfinn really there to helped them or does he have other sinister motives? Where are the people in the past going to next? What are the 5 Big Ones!? I have so many questions I honeslty am on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter!

And the connection to Draco! I am dying to know how that will play out and how it will effect Harry! I am so nervous for the four lost in the past! This is by far the best Dramione story I have read yet!

person 1_luv215
schedule October 26, 2019 at 12:00 AM

You are a doll! So much has happened so far and I can't wait to see what happenes next!

schedule October 20, 2019 at 12:00 AM

Intersting chapter. I like how you gave them a little bit of a "break" even if it was during the bubonic plague. They didnt have to fight and had a chance to heal and rest before going back at it. I hope Hermione doesnt take her sweet time in fogiving him. I have to say that they are my favorite fanfic couple. Whether this story has lemons or not, i will continue to read it because you are a great rider and have sucked me in. :)

person saxman66
schedule October 20, 2019 at 12:00 AM

Well Harry sick but hopefully will pull through. The good news is that the gang are leaving London and more importantly the plague behind, although I doubt it will be that comfortable wherever their going. Just hopefully not as lethal.

 

Hermione and Draco are still letting their pride and doubt get in the way and Ginny at least is still totally oblivious about Blaise. However the 1st two are making some progress and that is obviously having some affect on the state of the amulet. I'm guessing its only going to take them home when its fully repaired, which could also take some time. I also have a feeling what unpleasant circumstances will be required to change Ginny's attitude towards Blaise.

 

person 1_luv215
schedule October 16, 2019 at 12:00 AM

Well that was intense. But yay Dramione moments! Can't wait to see what happens next!

schedule October 16, 2019 at 12:00 AM

@Saxman66- Very true, but I didn't want them to use magic during that part because I wanted to show Draco's temper and kick the door in.

@Goddess-of_Dragons- Awe thank you Love! I do still need to one day go back and edit 1912 lol. I just don't know when that will be. I'm glad you like this story so far. My beta and I have worked very hard to bring something different to the table and it has been a rough road trying to get everything right since it's not just a single era like most TT stroies. Though, I have learned a lot of information on top of it all haha!

@Juerasana- Thank you Lovely! I hope you enjoyed Repeat After Me, that so far is my best work according to a lot readers on other sites. However, I do need to go back over all my stories one day and re edit them again, so don't judge them too harshly lol

@1_Luv215- You are awesome! I love that you made an account just to review every chapter and love each one as well. I can't thank you enough for that :)

schedule October 15, 2019 at 12:00 AM

I am loving this story! Just binge read all your other stories as well. Can't wait to read what happens!

person saxman66
schedule October 13, 2019 at 12:00 AM

Well that was close. I suspect they could have used more magic as apart from the low probability of anyone seeing them surviving their probably not likely to be believed. Alternatively if they were it might be thought some gods or demigods were sighted, although doing what would be a matter of question.

 

Harry when he recovers has a bit of a story to tell about the four travellers and some idea where their been. However how will he tell the families what he saw at the end, especially how friendly the four are looking. That could cause some disputes.

 

If I read it rightly the four are now in/heading for London, although at what time period we don't know yet. Plus I suspect their going to have some discussions of their own about what happened in those last few minutes. All of then could be in denial for at least a while longer however I suspect.

 

  Another good chapter. :D

schedule October 13, 2019 at 12:00 AM

Im beginning to like this story as much as your 1912 story. Every sunday i check back to see if you have updated and everytime you do i drop what im doing to sit down and read it. And every sunday im more anxious for the next chapter. I cant wait to see where they landed this time and if harry will be okay. I loving getting reviews and am horrible about review but thats going to change :). 

person 1_luv215
schedule October 11, 2019 at 12:00 AM

I can't...That chapter...was AMAZING! I can't even begin to express how grateful I am that I found this story. You're writing style is awesome and it makes me feel like I am actually in the past with the group. I don't know where you get you ideas for your stories but please DO NOT ever stop sharing them! I tried writing once and it is so difficult i actually gave up but seriously many many props to you and your beta. You are killin it! I am so excited and nervous to see what happens next. Sunday can't come soon enough!