It's a nice story.
Hot damn, this is one extremely gloriously smutty and scintalating kinky Harry Potter fics that I have read in years. Love how right from the getgo you introduce us to the new and improved Harry under the loving care and protection of his masters as they fuck and used and abuse his changed and transformed slutty body to their hearts content and full his holes and womb with the cum that slut Harry desperate wants and needs.
Aslo liked the second chapter and how you showed how Lucius and Severus got their hands on Harry in the first place and just a though it would be great to see you interspearse a series of flashback chapters dealing their turning and transformation of Harry into the slut that he is today, with present with chapters of being used, abused and fuck as the slut he is today in the present by his masters in all sorts of kinky positions, situations and fantassies that depraved minds can think of.
Please correct your disclaimer.
Your disclaimer doesn't have one of the two parts we need to see. It must say that no money/profit is made. Saying that it’s just for fun or just for entertainment purposes is not enough.
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