Man! This was such a sweet, innocent fanfic! I just discovered the story couple of days back and I was so hooked!
The ending was so amazing and the way you wrote it, it felt so real.
Theo's friendship and character was so adorable, he turned out to be my favorite. Though i didn't like how Ron turn out to be, since it's a fiction, I'll give it to you.
The innocence of first love making, damn it was so good, i wish it was a bit more detailed but none the less the awkwardness and innocence suffices.
Thank you for writing this and... Oh man! I'm so much in the euphoria of what I've just read.
Also, I have to mention this. These days, either fanfic writer leave the story in between or they are very inconsistent in their publishing (which can be justified in some cases or other), but you not only completed the story but also were very consistent and on time in publishing the chapters.
It was such a feeling of joy to see the chapter being published on the said promised day.
Regards and best wishes
A happy reader
Loved the final two chapters and cannot wait for you to write more stories! Well written for sure :)
Chapter 11:
Honestly can say I didn't see this coming, and yet it makes perfect sense instead of being a DEM. Well done.
Duh! I'm an idiot. You gave us a clue last chapter about Sadie having reason to hate Lucius but never considered it as a motive or that Draco rather than Hermione was the target of the sabotage of Hermoine's potion.
Well that answers the main question and sorts a lot out but Draco still has a number of issues to resolve, not to mention finally admitting, to himself and everybody else how he feels about Hermione. The Veritaserum is likely to be pretty useful here however.
A very well constructed story the way your fitted all the pieces of the plot together. :D
Loved the latest chapter! Keep it up! I do wish that Draco eventually confronts Ron about his jealousy head on too but can understand if he didn't. Would be funny to see ron's mouth gaping like a fish though if he went from confronting him to flat out snogging Hermione senseless LOL
Well that was grisly, then when Hermione laid down besides him I wondered if it was the last chapter.
He's learnt a bit more and sounds like he's got one last day to resolve everything. He knows the problems for Neville and Harry/Ginny as well as a lot more about some of his friends. However still unclear who sabotaged Hermione's potion or how to successfully expose assorted issues about Lavender Brown. Possibly also something to resolve with Sadie.
Given the date of the next story and the way how things are going here it sounds like the next chapter may be the last but its been an entertaining ride.
Took all morning to read this........ I LOVE IT!!! An I'm left hanging😢
Took all morning to read this........ I LOVE IT!!! An I'm left hanging😢
BISH GOT WHAT SHE DESURVED!!!!!!
She need s to stay dead
OMG this is getting hilarious. I'm loving Draco's inner monologues.