Very fun, intersting, and much more different than most Harry Potter fan fiction. Well done!
Wtf... Really girl. You were free!!!! Why go back to Mr. Jerk Butt? Gah!!!!
Noooo Draco save the lady!!! Why??? GET HER BAAAAACK
What the crap Harry!!! Make up your dang mind of what emotion you feel you bipolar ass!!! Like dang!! "I miss youuuu" -slaps instead- "but I miss you so much" -punches jaw- I don't know if anyone taught you this, but you don't hit girls that you missed dummy.
Love you author you're dong an amazing!
If there is meant to be a romance between her and Snape, one might thing he blew it. As for Hermione, it's about time it was made clear on why she was there. Keep up the amazing story. I can't get enough of it.
If there is meant to be a romance between her and Snape, one might thing he blew it. As for Hermione, it's about time it was made clear on why she was there. Keep up the amazing story. I can't get enough of it.
This is some dark shit man. Lol. It reminds me a bit of Anne Rice's Sleeping Beauty trilogy with the sex slavery. I think this may have ruined Harry a bit for me XD. At the same time, just more hot too. This is actually really good. Yeah, there are some punctuation errors, but we all get those from time to time. Keep up the good work! I can't wait to read more!
Finally!!! She gets love... well ish. But still Harry was gentle with her for the most part. I liked the chapter 7. Well done!!