It's cool Harry is actually thinking in this, and not completely letting severus take over now that he's aware of snape being his father. Not sure he should be putting his life in the hands of a man he's never seen the real face of though.
Loving this so far, can't wait for the next chapter with mor Dumbledore bashing.
A nice story so far.
Great story! Very interesting plot! Can't wait to read what's coming next!!!
Please update chapter 8 soon ðŸ˜
I’ve become very invested in this story in such a short amount of time. I can’t wait to see what happens next.
I am greatly enjoying this story. The development of Harry and Neville is great. Can’t wait for the rest
ive read all the chapters and im enjoying it sooo much i cant wait to see where it goes. so please keep up the great work and update again soon :)
From reading the first chapter this does seem like a good story. My only problem is that it seems really rushed. To many things are going on at once and we are not given a chance to really comprehended what we are reading before something else is thrust our way. Considering it is so short I urge you to take your time with writing or maybe add a bit more information in each scene. I think this is a wonderful and unique idea so I look forward to reading in the future.
I love the angle that you are writing this from. I haven't read too many fics where severus is harry's father but I've enjoyed each one so far. You are doing a wonderful job and I look forward to the next chapter!