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schedule January 11, 2019 at 12:00 AM

Haha! Busted!! Something told me that those books may have been for her! I’d love to see Draco x Hermione later! Slow build, banter, & all of that! If it’s Harry that you’re alluding to, I’m definitely for it! I’d also love to see if anything sparks for her and Luna 😋! 

schedule January 10, 2019 at 12:00 AM

PS: Forgot to log in and review. Sorry about that. You can delete my other one.

Once again a nice addition to the story. I for one can't wait to read about the exploits of Draco and Hermione. You just wrote them in such a way that I just can't help but like them both.

 

As for pairing options before that relation develops. Not to give to much pushback against your vision, but are you sure it's all that neccesary for the storyline? Hermione's exploration of her sexual side, can't that start with Draco? Perhaps he is unaccustomed to that side of himself as well and they can both discover it together. My personal preference. Might be an idea.

 

Or are they both going to go their own way for a while, both having lovers, but gradually come together?... sorry for the pun...

 

If you decide that they are going to have other partners first. It's perhaps best to no have them interact sexually before that...

 

What ever you decide remember. It's just only my vision and you as the artist have yours. Whatever you decide it can never be wrong, nor can anyone else drive you into a certain way. That's not how art works...

person Anonymous
schedule January 10, 2019 at 12:00 AM

DRAMIONE now please!!!

XD

schedule January 8, 2019 at 12:00 AM

Caught up! Okay so I’m happy everyone is starting to think about the future! However, poor Hermione cannot catch a break from catching Lavender on top of somebody! 😅😅 

person Anonymous
schedule January 3, 2019 at 12:00 AM

I love this story so far. And I can't wait for the next chapter!

schedule December 31, 2018 at 12:00 AM

You wrote that scene to perfection! I was like Harry you better get it!! 😂😂 You did great! I loved seeing Kreature again. I think people forget about him turning good before the end. Nice touch!

schedule December 29, 2018 at 12:00 AM

I can understand what Lavender meant, doesn’t make it right, but she didn’t force Ron to do anything. Ron was the one saying he loved Hermione. She and Lavender weren’t close. It isn’t pretty, but can be rationalized. Ron is a self centered prick if he really doesn’t think he deserved that punch! It goes without saying that I enjoyed this chapter.

schedule December 28, 2018 at 12:00 AM

I sense a spark of awareness... thank you for updating 🙃

schedule December 26, 2018 at 12:00 AM

You’re right, of course! She is definitely better than that. I do like how you’ve made Draco a more considerate/observant person! I’m excited to see how he reacts to the news. I also wonder how she’s going to react to Ron’s pending apology. I do hope you feel better soon! 

person Hvsmith
schedule December 26, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Enjoying this so far, look forward to reading more!