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schedule October 20, 2019 at 12:00 AM

I really loved this chapter. I know it is hard for Draco to see Hermione get into hysterics. In time I believe he will be able to calm her down. My husband is the same as Draco. I shall wait on the edge of my seat for the next update as always. I see myself in Hermione the more this story goes. And that us a good/bad thing. Bad because I relive some past stuff. But mainly good because I have also have a man that does his beat to make it alright. You my dear have me on the edge of my seat with each chapter

schedule October 18, 2019 at 12:00 AM

Love the ending! Though, if you are ever in need of a beta I am available to help out. Shoot me an email if you're interested. I left it in a review on my page not long ago :)

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schedule October 18, 2019 at 12:00 AM

This is cruelty, cruelty, I say!  You're doing the 'going half of each new distance' toward a Granger reunion and it's making me nuts!

^_^

schedule October 11, 2019 at 12:00 AM

I feel like I started reading this story awhile ago because when I started it, it sounded so familiar lol. Turns out I was right, and you have contiuned to keep going with it! I love that you didn't give up. I like the friendship between Pansy and Hermione. Not many stories, I'll admit even my own lol, allow Pansy to get to know the girl and vice versa. And I love Draco being all sweet and agreeing to watch a romanic movie if it makes Hermione happy. I'm sorry I have neglected to read most stories of the people who have reviewed my fics, but I am slowly getting around to it. Yours is one of the first on this site and truely, I really loved it. I can't wait to read more :) 

schedule October 11, 2019 at 12:00 AM

It was great to see Hermione get some bonding time with the girls. Especially when Pansy made a point of defending her later on. I'm glad you took some time to develop Hermione's other relationships, but I'm also really excited to see what happens when Draco gets back w!th her parents. Keep up the good work!

Man, sounds like RL is really putting you through it right now. I hope things start to get easier soon. I know exactly what you mean about writing being an escape. Works well for me to, when I can find the time!

If you're already on ff.net I would say definitely start posting there. The activity on this site has really fallen off in the last few years. Very few people bother reviewing, which is frustrating. I myself post on AO3, which has a very active community and is where I get most of my feedback. It also lets you reply directly to comments, so it's more like a conversation than the way reviews are done here. So that might be worth trying as well. Maybe I'll see you over there :)

schedule October 9, 2019 at 12:00 AM

I loved the chapter so much. I am happy that you finally posted a new chapter.  Your story is my escape from the crap going on in my life. I hope everything is still good with your family. I am happy that Hermione's mother and father are  still giving Draco a chance to prove himself that he is better. Never thought that the purebloods are in for for a big change starting with Pansy's mother. I can't wait for more of the story. Keep on posting you are doing a great job.

schedule September 10, 2019 at 12:00 AM

I'm really glad you took the time to show this conversation between Draco and Hermione's dad. Sometimes we need some good character and relationship development rather than plot, and I thought it was really well done. I like that Mr. Granger is warming to Draco whereas Mrs. Granger is still skeptical. It feels realistic and establishes some good tension that could be explored later.

I'm so sorry to hear that there have been so many challenges lately! It's impressive that you're even still writing with all that going on, so you really should give yourself a pat on the back, and some leeway to handle those real-life things when you need to. I'm in a similar boat, not to the extent that you are, of course. Work has just kept me busy and I feel so behind on my writing!

It's very frustrating that this site doesn't have a way for users to personal message each other. It would be very convenient, wouldn't it? I would have been happy to help, although I think your plan of going back through writing you like and see how it's done is a really good one. I do that a lot to get inspiration or figure out how to write a scene. Unfortunately, the other site I post on doesn't having PMing either. I try to keep my real identity and my fanfic identity separate, for many reasons, and so don't give out my email address here. But I have considered creating a separate, anonymous email for my Thunderbird stuff, in case people want to chat with me. I haven't decided if it's a good idea or not, but if I do end up doing it I will certainly let you know! <3333

schedule September 9, 2019 at 12:00 AM

How could I give up on you? Your story is what keeps me sane. I feel ya on the life taking a dump on ya. Life has done that to me. But I have been checking everyday to see of you have posted. You have out done yourself with this chapter. I hope that Hermione's mom warms up to Draco soon. I know how Draco is feeling with one person out of Hermione's family liking him and the other not so much. But I know I will have to wait until the next chapter to read to find out what happens next. Hopefully we will find out about who sent the letters to them. I still have the theory that it was Patrick that sent them. I hope that your grandma feels better. 

schedule August 26, 2019 at 12:00 AM

No need to apologize for taking some extra time to finish the chapters, or for stretching the plot over the chapters that it needs to stretch. This is your story, hun, and we'll be there for it as you keep working on it!

Hermione's parents seemed to take things in stride, which I'm glad for. Though I am anxious to see Hermione's reaction, I also am liking that Draco is getting a chance to know them on his own. Hopefully they will approve despite his past. I have a feeling once they see Draco and Hermione together, and how much they love each other, they will be supportive :)

Looks like it's shaping up to be a fun holiday for everyone! Can't wait to see what happens next! <3

schedule August 20, 2019 at 12:00 AM

I loved this chapter alot. I am happy that they have Hermione's parents with them. I hope that her parents accept Draco for who he is now and not judge him for who he was. I hope Hermione doesn't get mad at Draco for not telling her what he was doing. You always have me waiting for the next chapter on the edge of my seat. I shall be waiting for the next chapter like a good girl. You keep me guessing on what will happen next. I thought they would demand for Draco to be hexed by someone