SG214
Well that could explain what happened and from Draco's details on what happens when the curse is used with some reluctance and inexperience that fits. Ron is also the obvious suspect, because of his anger and also the fact that Hermione seems to be getting on with him while hostile to Draco, Harry and Ginny. Although if there was a third party up to mischief he's also the obvious fall-guy in the current situation. I rather hope its not him because its become rather a clique that if Hermione ends up with someone other than Ron he's painted as at least an idiot if not an actual villein.
I did put a review in yesterday about the previous chapter. Rather busy with some other stuff elsewhere so made it short but enjoying the story. Its showing up when I check the review lists so went in OK?
Well that was an unexpected twist. I wonder why Hermione has forgotten about the blood donation? Good intensity however but sounds like some rocky times ahead for the couple as well as possibly others.
That last sentence is rather concerning. I suspect its Ron and he's going to do something stupid.
I love how awkward and shy they seem to be! I cannot express how much I love the uniqueness of this story!
A disaster, AND amnesia.
Yep, this is a Slytherin-Goddess-214 story, all right. ^_^
Now my do I get the feeling Hermione will wake up but with her memory lost since some time at Hogwarts so she thinks Draco's a right arse-hole?
I would like some sex in the story but as I say a good story can survive without it. A longer story is always good however.
No sex at all sounds rather frustrating, both for readers and the two central characters ;) but could still be a good story.
Does Hermione's sudden revival have something to do with a magic bond between them? Rather like the way Draco is reviewing what they were saying to each other and seeing the conversation in a new light as he thinks about it again.
I'm literally crying soooooo hard. This is amazing and I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the AMAZING work PLEASE!!!!
Well that's got them both in a bad way but especially Hermione. Still she's made the step to declaring an interest.
Well their actually starting to get friendly, nothing like being in peril of your lives to make people change their perceptions of others. Pity they could save either of the two people they came across but still got some way to go to escape themselves.
Had forgotten about that tornado but two was sounding suspicious. However if its just a twist and no darker elements at work that would remove on problem.
Once again a true masterpiece for all intents and purposes. You manage to check all the boxes for what makes a Draco/Hermione story truly great, and what seperates it from most others.
Draco and Hermione act like Draco and Hermione. Draco oozes high power eliteism, with a cocky undertone. He shows you who's boss, escpeccially in his dealings with those who anger him (ie Tate). Hermione is still her usual strong willed and bright self. She truly knows what to do in a crisis.
Perfect paceing. Most other stories have them profess their undying love for each other and before you know it the pants and knickers come of. But your story is perfectly paced. Slowly but surely their feelings come to the foreground, brougt on by traumatic events over a good long period of time.
As for the steamy and sexy bits. Not that there have been any explicit things happening (obviously when you think about it... Who wants to get it on in a collapsing building...) But the most simple act of touching a hand or caressing a cheek for a little while longer than neccesary. The way you set the scene, the event, the feelings of the characters. I can truly 'feel' the growing affection the have for each other. And that is just great. To be able to convey those feelings is true gift that not that many have.
I can't wait to read more.
With kind regards,
The Flaming Dictator