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person saxman66
schedule October 28, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Well good chapter along I suspect the presentation of the maid of honour and best man was possibly a bit strong. Although that could be just me being a withdrawn social misfit. Anyway enjoyed it a lot.

 

Hope none of them are superstitious given the date.

 

I'm guessing that Hermione is on the traditional 9 month diet? Although the symptoms do seem to have hit a bit rapidly. As Goddess of Dragons said they do seem to have overlooked the contraception spell before that last time together on the Titanic – good catch that woman as I missed it completely. :)

 

Could mean a short engagement as it would be awkward if Hermione had too much of a bump when she goes up the aisle – although given the date of conception it might technically be the longest pregnancy on record. ;)

person Anon
schedule October 28, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Gee, what could POSSIBLY be affecting Hermione? ^_^

schedule October 25, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Thank goodness for Astoria being there. That could have gotten way out of hand lol. What I'm really excited about is the wedding and I don't remember Draco doing the spell the last time they were intimate before the Titanic sank....so maybe a baby to? Or did I miss read that?

person saxman66
schedule October 25, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Well that's got the problem with the Greengrass's sorted out or at least eased. Ironic that the tipping point was when Astoria put her oar in. ;) Will still need some calming work and of course that Hermione's ideas can help.

 

Good development of Draco's growing maturity and his acceptance of his problems and Harry's help.

 

It sounds like they aren't in on the secret of what actually happened? Instead their getting the same story as the couple said to the Daily Prophet. Knowing the truth might have helped them understand, especially for Astoria I suspect but then that would have been a major risk in keeping it secret.

schedule October 24, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Oh, my. That last part brought me to tears. I love this story. It has easlier become one of my favorites. I can't wait to hear what happens with the Greengrass' family.

person saxman66
schedule October 24, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Like it. Nothing dramatic but a careful interview. I notice their not being totally honest about what happened but that would have complicated matters massively. Also if Pansy has made such a clumsy move it seems to have been well spiked and hopefully make it more difficult to do anything else. Other than something really stupid which she might try but I hope not. Loved Hermione doing the Scottish to English translation for Draco. Excellent touch of humour.

 

Hermione's visit to Malfoy Manor and running into old nightmares was very well done. Had forgotten about her being captured and tortured there and something like that is always going to have an effect. Hopefully memories will ease over time but that would really make visiting the in-laws awkward. ;)

person saxman66
schedule October 23, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Well that was a good happy fun time, most of it anyway. Glad that Ron hasn't done something stupid as that could have been nasty and seems to be coming around. Love the interactions between Ginny and Ron especially and how far Draco has changed.

 

So outstanding problems would be the interview to get the press off their back, apologising to Astoria and her family, which hopefully shouldn't be too difficult and any problems Pansy might cause.

person Anon
schedule October 23, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Still very good so far.  Two things for editing, though:

It's Daily PROPHET, not PROFIT

and

being British, Hermione would refer to Oprah as a "chat show".

schedule October 22, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Wow. Lots going on. Typical Ron though. How are they going to explain it to everyone else? It's not like the whole wizarding world can look at their memories.

person saxman66
schedule October 22, 2018 at 12:00 AM

  PS I think it would be a very good idea if Ginny visits her family ASAP.  Otherwise their only going to hear Ron's side of events which could be bad.