I liked this one. I always knew Ron and hermione were a bad couple but I liked how this one ended things
I've noticed you've been uploading half chapters, and sorry to say it, but I really wish you'd upload the final full chapter all at once rather than doing the partials and adding the finished product later. It makes it very confusing to read and can be annoying to us readers. Please just wait to upload until the chapter is 100% finished...
I have been reading since the start of the story and I really like it. My only critique would be the length of the chapters. They seem a bit short and I really wish they were a bit longer.
Amazing story. What a great idea to incorporate muggle medicine practices. Keep up the great work
You have gained my interest. I love your wording with this story and how you have incorperated different views. I can't wait for your next update.
The concept of the story is a very nice one. I don't think I've ever read somethign like it. So in that regard you get maximum points for originality. I can't wait to see how it al pans out and how (and if) Draco and Hermoine get together in the end.
With kind regards,
TheFlamingDictator