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person Jeda26
schedule October 23, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Really hope that you find the time to update this gorgeous glorious jewel of a femdon/feminization story with new chapters some time very soon.

person Dtb3824
schedule September 16, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Can’t wait for the next chapter. Really looking forward to seeing where you go with this and seeing the first joint Harry and Hermione scene. 

person Jeda26
schedule August 31, 2018 at 12:00 AM

So whore Hermione is born. Absolutely loved the latest chapter as we get to see what devilishly evil and sexy fun thatHermione and Cormac got up to while Luna was turning Harry into her sissy bitch during the same timescale. Cormac certainly when to town on Hermione and completewly dominated her from start to finish and tore away all her novel ideas about sex and turned her into a sexy slut/whore eager to service and pleasure her master's cock in any way, shape or form. Looking forward to seeing what jappens when the two seperate stories, entertwin to  become one who;e story, sure there will be lots of sexual fireworks. galore.

Before that happens, given how Ginny's thoughs were heading in chapter 3 that she wants to own Harry, to make him hers and hers alone, so that she can sexually dominate and abuse his sissy body to her hearts delight, is something that I would love to see happen and thing should definately hapen next. As having noticed Harry's emotional  reaction to the news about Hermione and Cormac is going to use that to her advantage to push her lustful desires and plan forward or so I hope. 

person Jeda26
schedule August 27, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Hie, what happened to the fourth chapter you posted last night detailing Hermione's and Cormac's sexual tyrst following Slughorn's party. Read it last night and it seemed fine then saw this morning that one user had left two unflattering reviews calling the chapter rape and was wondering if this led to the moderators taking it down or you yourself taking it down to re-write it. Hope you get everything sorted out soon and repost chapter 4, hopefully alongside chapter 5 very soon.

person vader420
schedule August 27, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Hi,
I agree with Jeda26 about chapter 4. I am really looking forward to the interaction between Luna, Cormac and Hermione. I  hope that you'll repost chapter 4, hopefully alongside chapter 5 soon.

person Jeda26
schedule August 24, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Oh my God, loved the latest chapter, It was an absolutely dosey of smutty erotica and glorious femdom sex and other wonderful kinks as Luna allowed Ginny to first view and then join in with the ginny eagerly having her wicked way with Harry as well as losing her virginity to a proper cock worthy of her; Luna's. Loved the way Ginny's thoughs are heading that she wants to own Harry, to make him hers and hers alone, so that she can sexually dominate and abuse his sissy body to hearts delight, something that I would love to see happen and having noticed Harry's emotional  reaction to the news about Hermione and Cormac is going to use that to her advantage to push her lustful desires and plan forward. 

person Jeda26
schedule August 19, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Such a brilliant story and please update so very soon as you left it on an awesome cliff-hanger that I can't wait to see resolved and explored to its full erotic potential.

person VeltsuVI
schedule August 7, 2018 at 12:00 AM

mentioning later review, i don't think Luna's master is Malfoy, because he didn't call Hermione as Mudblood.

I be waiting next chapter too.

schedule August 7, 2018 at 12:00 AM

I hate cliffhangers in the best way. Can't wait to find out who this "master" is. 

person Jeda26
schedule August 7, 2018 at 12:00 AM

VeltsuVI, your  probably right on the master, not being Malfoy, unless he has managed the ability to think, before he opens his mouth. As he always did call Hermione mudblood or some variation of it.

Don't like cliffhamnger and like the rest opf you,c an;t wait to read the next chapter to see Ginny's reaction to seeing exactly the sissy bitch that her beloved hero has become and how she decides to use that to her advantage with Luna's permission of course.