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for Who Are They Now? *COMPLETE*

by Snapes_Slave

schedule June 22, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Hello there! Lovely dinner and conversation with Draco and Astoria. I liked his explanation of love to her and that she's struggling with the song because she's trying to put love into logical thought. I laughed that they didn't think they could just sleep together and not have sex. lol And, then the mystery... So the curse has some repellant charms on it regarding love... She's been healing the closer they get to one another... He felt emotions that weren't his... She loves him, as evidenced by her dream... He's not fully in love with her and recognizes that the impulse came from outside of himself... I am really bad at guessing these things, but was she somehow cursed to have to find love in order to heal by someone who assumed she never would find it? Or was she cursed to not have love and by finding it it's releasing the curse? Hmmm Either way, I look forward to your take on it! :-) Thank you, hon. HG4eva

schedule June 19, 2018 at 12:00 AM

I don't think I've ever been anyone's biggest fan. :-) YAY!!!! *tosses confetti** (then gets angry because that damn stuff stays for freakin' ever! lol) Anyway... :-)  Thank you. I loved this chapter because even though she didn't show herself, she accepted him for who he is as he is, got good advice from the girls (and Draco-ette ha ha ha), and opened herself up more than normal to Severus. I did notice Draco's comment about him possibly helping her heal, too. ;-) I am so happy there's another chapter to read. :-) Thanks! HG4eva

schedule June 17, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Somehow, I missed this story!! An amazing plot!! I’m loving what I’ve read so far & am excited for the next update! 

schedule June 13, 2018 at 12:00 AM

That was really well done! Smooooottthhhh! I loved the way you mixed it together. :-)  I also really enjoyed his admissions and her nervousness. I am sorry she is so scared to be free with her body and its scars and I really hope he knows of a way to help her once he knows what's going on and how they haven't healed. His free love of her is beautiful. Happy sigh... Thank you, HG4eva

schedule June 6, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Hi there! I can't believe I missed your updates! I will have to check more often. :-) I loved her time with her friends and how predicatble they all were for her. I think I loved Ron's reasoning and care for her most. :-) I liked your Luna, no worries there, either. As for her feeling so content, I hope she stays strong and hopeful, as no relationship (especially between these two scared rabbits) is going to be easy or without a fwe stumbles. lol  Thank you! On to the next chapter! HG4eva

schedule June 6, 2018 at 12:00 AM

I am in love with their freedom to express themselves to one another! The fact that they touch so freely and are so honest with each other bodes really well for their final happiness. I look forward to them performing together, almost as much as their double date with Draco and Astoria. I would also love to see him trying to be comfortable around her friends eventually, as Severus needs to show Ron that he is truly what she needs. Thank you again! HG4eva

person SL
schedule June 4, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Thanks for such a refreshing story: I'd love to read more about how Severus came to his transformation.

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schedule May 24, 2018 at 12:00 AM
schedule May 20, 2018 at 12:00 AM

This story is amazing. A complete 180 from your first one and it’s great. Loving the fact they both turn out to be theater geeks. It truly takes someone going through PTSD to fully understand someone going through it themselves. Can’t wait to see how this story unfolds! 

schedule May 20, 2018 at 12:00 AM

I absolutely LOVE that neither is being subtle in their interest. :-) I am also glad to know she feels so safe with him, as I think she will be spending quite a bit of time with him. lol I am enjoying your use of the music to tell the story. Kudos on that! And, I look forward to seeing the rest of the gang! Thank you, HG4eva