I really enjoyed reading this new chapter. Please update, your fanfiction is truly amazing!
I really enjoyed reading this new chapter. Please update, your fanfiction is truly amazing!
I really enjoyed reading this new chapter. Please update, your fanfiction is truly amazing!
It gets better and better. The slow burn everyone is talking about is killing me, though. I love it, but I need more. I'm so impatient for the next chapter! I hope you continue to write and post more really soon! You're awesome!
I love this story. You have such skill with the slow burn. Though I am a little impatient to see them finally sort out their feelings (and get it on haha), every chapter that brings them closer to understanding and caring for each other is really enjoyable. There's so much rich detail here. I also love that while the setting is dark, it's not depressing, much like with The Hole (which I also loved). It keeps me coming back for more. Please update soon!
Really enjoying it so far. Please please update.
Please update sooon
i actually really like how the story builds, good job!
Yay, glad you're continuing this!
I know you felt like this chapter was kind of filler but I liked it! You gave some important background about the war, plus we all can take a guess at what Snape was dreaming about when he was under that curse :) I wonder how he's going to handle it once he and Hermione started prying into each other's minds in the Legilimency lessons.
Looking forward to more!
feverish heat surrounding her as he drug his nose along the edge of her pulled-back hair.
"dragged" not "drug" I don't know why so many people misuse this word, it drives me nuts. Does "drug" actually sound right to anyone. Read it out loud.
a great chapter !