A long generally well written story. A few editing errors/misses, but that is common to all the stories on this site. My pet peeve for this story is shutter vs shudder: shutters are found on the outside houses and buildings, and are either decorative or protective for windows; shudder is to shake, from cold or fear, usually.
What bugs me, after all that reading, on an ‘adult’ site, was the lack of a payoff! The author was more than willing to have Harry & Ginny masturbate and fantasize, and clearly ‘set the table’ for their relationship to take the next step, even hinting that the ‘slow burn’ would be worth the wait. They are both even at the ages where sexual activity and experimentation normally starts. Then, NOTHING! Thanks for that.
Loved reading through this. I've never really gotten into romance stories before but I couldn't put this down. I hope you'll come back to finis the story, I was enthralled!
Hey,
Is there any other site where you might post more stories ? If it is then please do share. I would love to read more of your stories.
Please finish this one otherwise i might send you a howler ;)
Brilliant writting. I read the whole lot within a day i was so addicted to it. I just wish i could get to hear i bit of more what i would like to hear..... a bit fast
Love this story and cant wait to read more
Amazing Story, I only registered to this site to congratulate you! I really loved it, and I hated reaching the end, you really should consider continuing the story!! Thank you so much for writing this!
I'm really enjoying this so far! It's not every day you get a Harry/Ginny story before the death of Voldemort, and I love the way you are more richly developing their connection. So props to you for a unique story idea and for carrying it out beautifully. I'll be really interested to see how them finally getting together changes all the events of the war that are about to come. Plus I just really want to see them finally get together! Please update soon!
Wow, you posted lot at 6 hours. So good story that couldn't stop reading.