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for Convincing Stark *COMPLETE*

by Talented_Mrs_Lupin

person WillZel
schedule March 25, 2019 at 12:00 AM

I'm going to start reading the second one now just wanted to say LOVEING IT! ! ! 

schedule February 14, 2019 at 12:00 AM

This whole chapter was FANTASTIC! Lol

schedule August 17, 2018 at 12:00 AM

I am sorry this story is complete, but look forward to the sequal so I can see Hermione squash the Malfoy empire. Well, perhaps not squash it, but at least not excell in this area and not make any more money from something that was basically Hermione's idea in the first place. I do feel sort of bad about Draco though, he seemed to really like Hermione. I hope he finds someone else to love. 

schedule July 13, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Brilliant, but you could have told the readers what was whispered!!! Now inquiring minds want to know. Thanks for the update! 

schedule June 17, 2018 at 12:00 AM

I have spent an enjoyable couple of hours with this story today reading all the chapters. It is funny and refreshingly original and witty. I truly appreciate the talent you have expressed. Thank you so much. 

schedule April 12, 2018 at 12:00 AM

I am loving this story so far. Keep going and please do not stop.

-voldemortsgirl

person dcross22
schedule April 12, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Don’t normally do reviews but this is one of the few stories I feel compelled to let you know how much I’m enjoying it and that I really hope you continue this I think it is a brilliant idea and not one I’ve seen before at least not done like this, it’s well written easy to read and thankfully free of bad spelling and grammar which so often plague promising stories. I did feel that the reveal of Hermonies powers to stark and banner was a bit to quick and rushed but It didn’t spoil the story so not a major issue